Some time before the Nightmare Incident Luna took in a young filly. Now that filly returns one thousand years later with anger in her heart and vengeance in her soul. Can Luna fight her own daughter? And can Twilight manage to stop an enemy that has spent a millennia becoming the equal of even the Alicorns? And in the end...is Crescent even truly the villain of this tale, or Celestia?
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It seems a little fast paced
2526859 This is the setup right now. I like to have a strong, well made beginning to catch my readers. I will be slowing down the pace once all the major points are established, but once that happens there will be some down time for the crew.
After all, all work and no play makes Pinkie Pie into Pinkamina
and then we all go like this.
Short description uses the word woman. Just saying.
2628599 Are you referring to Fluttershy's description