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Aug
28th
2017

SCP-2835 Constructive Criticism and Paddy's Last Jest · 8:34pm Aug 28th, 2017

Nov
26th
2021

"One Last Hearths Warming Chapter 1" Constructive Criticism · 12:21pm Nov 26th, 2021

Do I get on Mykan's case a lot? Does an Ursa poop in the Everfree? Actually, do Ursas even poop? And what would Ursa poop even look like? ...Sorry, I got a little distracted. The answer is supposed to be yes. Will this blog be any different? Well, that depends on how you wanna look at it.

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Dec
4th
2021

"One Last Hearths Warming Chapter 2" Constructive Criticism · 2:21pm Dec 4th, 2021

Continued from Part 1...

As you may have noticed in the comments section of Part 1, Mykan is mostly petty. And I will not tolerate him spamming the comments section just to argue with me. However, I will not stop him from commenting entirely, just in case I do make a mistake. And I did make one in the last part. And that's why I say mostly petty.

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Oct
1st
2016

Slightly Rewriting of Beethoven's Tenth · 1:57am Oct 1st, 2016

Okay, before anyone panic's, just hear me out on this.

As of today, the user Ryvaken, after some discussion, have given me some constructive criticism about the story. You see, he basically pointed out that there were a few plot holes that needed to be fixed, which are:

- There's a lack of emphasis of writing the Tenth symphony and Ludwig's obsession to get home is unrealistic.

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Oct
6th
2016

Rewrite Complete · 4:10am Oct 6th, 2016

Dear Bronies and Pegasisters,

After about a week of going through the entire story, of correcting contradictions, adding new details, sentences and paragraphs while rewriting the other half of the previous chapter, I'm relieved to say that it is done. By tomorrow, I can finally begin to work on the next chapter, that is, unless if Ryvaken has any objections.

Your fellow writer and closeted Brony,

- CrackedInkWell.

Jul
7th
2015

New Story! · 12:06pm Jul 7th, 2015

Hi, I'm new around here. And that's where I stop. I'm not talking about myself in this post, but about my first story on here: Sombre. I love constructive criticism from others so I can better myself and my writing. I am not claiming to be an amazing writer, because I am far from it. I have a lot to learn. Which is why I have posted my story on here. It's a work in progress, and I am moving soon, and will be starting up my final year of schooling soon. So in the chaos, perhaps some ideas will

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Jun
8th
2018

Leaving a dislike on a story. · 6:46pm Jun 8th, 2018

In all honesty, I believe that if you leave a dislike on a story, or at least my stories, you should tell me why you left a dislike. Right now, on my story GaLm and the Derp Crew: Erebus, I have 9 likes and 15 dislikes. I have no Idea what is wrong with this story to have it skewed this way. If you have the time to dislike something, at least leave some constructive criticism. I just don't get why people don't do this.

Apr
7th
2021

Miniature plans · 4:34pm Apr 7th, 2021

So... I have plans to create the whole Ponyville town out of glued paper and cardboard. :rainbowlaugh:

The project is still in its early stages so I can’t post any images or videos of it yet on youtube or anywhere else, about constructing the whole town together. I also have a close friend who’s also helping me out with the project a bit.

I have a feeling that Ponyville will look amazing when we finish it all. :pinkiehappy:

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Dec
15th
2021

"One Last Hearths Warming Chapter 3" Constructive Criticism · 2:34am Dec 15th, 2021

Continued from Part 2...

I don't know if Mykan is ignoring me now (which I can't complain about) or he just has nothing to say (which I also can't complain about). Either way, I figure that no news is good news.

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Aug
27th
2021

HEADS UP · 11:55pm Aug 27th, 2021

Hello everyone, just wanted to give another heads up.

So letting you guys know that a new chapter is underway. However getting a little ambitous I have a few new stories lined up. Relax it not like going to be a story dump or anything like that. I just wanted to test the waters and see what works for me. Here's a few titles i can show jut too see what you're in for. Course these titles are far from being complete.

  • The Manehattan Hero
  • Optic Crash

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Nov
17th
2019

Signal Boost: The New . . . Pony? · 5:18pm Nov 17th, 2019

And we’ve got another entry into the not-a-contest: this time it’s The New . . . Pony? by thatoneguyisbestpony.


Source

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Jul
18th
2019

Slightly TMI Real Talk/Humble Brag · 6:36pm Jul 18th, 2019

With an enigmatic title like that, you just have to click “Read More”, don’t you?!

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Mar
31st
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner: Description/Title Reviews #3 · 9:42am Mar 31st, 2016

The description and title are some of the most important parts of a story. They provide readers with their first impression, convince them to read it, and characterize your story even after it is finished.

Today, we look at a set of stories, based solely on their descriptions, titles, and other relevant paratext.

The Alicorn Curse by chillbook1
http://i.imgur.com/BAtZIgd.png

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Jan
19th
2018

First Time For Everything, I Suppose. · 12:30pm Jan 19th, 2018

For the first time in my six years here, I have blocked a follower.

Two things drive me to write fan fiction.

1. My own imagination and inspiration.
2. Reader feedback on existing chapters.

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Jan
25th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #18 — Bitter-Sweetie · 7:41am Jan 25th, 2016

Jun
6th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #27 — Palimpsest · 11:17pm Jun 6th, 2016

Jan
21st
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #16 — So You've Just Slept With Your Best Friend · 12:42am Jan 21st, 2016

Aug
25th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #7 — Lost and Never Found · 3:10am Aug 25th, 2015

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Format Breakdown


Today’s story relies on not one, but two twists. Since the first twist is incredibly blunt, I have not bothered to spoiler-tag it.


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Oct
31st
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #12 — Just A Simple Story · 8:28pm Oct 31st, 2015

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I don’t like catering to holidays, but here’s a review for Halloween anyway. Any time is a good time to review Dark fic.


Title: Just A Simple Story

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Jan
23rd
2016

Taking Review Requests [CLOSED] · 11:36am Jan 23rd, 2016

If [OPEN], I am accepting new requests. If [CLOSED], I am working on other things (check back later :twilightsmile:)

If you follow me, then you are likely aware of my ongoing review series. In order to mix things up a little, I am now taking requests for stories to review. Like everything in life, there are some caveats:
*Only request reviews for one of your own stories.

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