Flash Fiction #9--July 28th--2023--Friday · 7:15pm Jul 28th, 2023
So...This was unwieldy. I had one version that I liked better because then it had more evocative detail. I was trying to learn how to add detail without sacrificing the story...well...my beautiful pacing got shot...
Then...I got a high score from the review from Claude and I was really happy. But, wanting to always improve...I added more detail...and more detail and better opening and then...
My pacing was gone.
My spicy character work was gone and...now...
sigh...I got a six.