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May
22nd
2018

In Which I Tolerate Eclipse: Chapter 15 -- Wager · 3:31pm May 22nd, 2018

Bella’s shocked at Jacob being in love with her, somehow. She tries to tell him that she likes him as a friend, as family, and that she doesn’t love him like that. Jacob, however, won’t take “no” for an answer.

“Just try not to get too mad at me. Because I recently decided that I’m not giving up. There really is something irresistible about a lost cause.”

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May
24th
2018

In Which I Tolerate Eclipse: Chapter 16 -- Epoch · 2:52pm May 24th, 2018

Going straight from philosophical musings on possible identity shifts through transhumanism to a teenage girl moaning about what to wear. What a great segue.

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May
26th
2018

In Which I Tolerate Eclipse: Chapter 17 -- Alliance · 1:14pm May 26th, 2018

Edward joins Bella outside the Cullens’ house and they walk inside to Alice has essentially turned it into a nightclub. It’s not long before a bunch of Bella’s “friends” (whose existence feels obligatory at this point) show up and get the party going. Soon, other kids from school, eager to see the inside of the reclusive Cullens’ house, also arrive, making the place pretty crowded.

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May
6th
2018

In Which I Tolerate Eclipse: Chapter 7 -- Unhappy Ending · 12:44pm May 6th, 2018

Well, I’m unhappy, so why isn’t the series ending?

Entering Bella’s room, Rosalie says she wants to talk to Bella while Edward’s away, since he rarely leaves her alone and it’s unlikely she’ll get an opportunity like this. Specifically, she’s going to give Bella a more concrete reason as to why she should stay human. And then, guess what: more backstory!

1933. Rosalie was eighteen, and her family was rich because her father had a stable job in a bank.

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Jun
10th
2018

In Which I Tolerate Eclipse: Chapter 24 -- Snap Decision · 12:49pm Jun 10th, 2018

With Jacob gone, Bella’s lying on the ground, waiting to die. With Bella whining, I’m sitting in my chair, waiting for the book to end. Edward asks her what’s wrong, and when she explains, he says Jacob’s “cunning”. The reasons are weird and I don’t care. Edward asks Bella if she really thought Jacob would go out in a blaze of glory to clear the way for him. Given that Charlie is the only character with something approaching a human personality, that option shouldn’t be discounted out of hand.

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May
20th
2018

In Which I Tolerate Eclipse: Chapter 14 -- Declaration · 12:31pm May 20th, 2018

Even with the threat of the newborn army, Alice wants Bella’s graduation party to go on. After all, Bella can only graduate from high school for the first time once. And in spite of Bella’s protests, the Cullens are taking the newborn issue seriously; they’ll be heading out to Seattle in a week.

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May
31st
2018

In Which I Tolerate Eclipse: Chapter 19 -- Selfish · 2:48pm May 31st, 2018

What else is new?

Edward takes Bella home from the meeting and she sleeps through most of the day. Edward notices the charm Jacob gave her and wonders why Jacob can give her presents when she didn’t want any last birthday. Bella says she likes homemade presents. Edward asks if he can give her a hand-me-down to go on the bracelet.

“A charm — something to keep me on your mind.”

“You’re in every thought I have. I don’t need reminders.”

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Jun
16th
2018

In Which I Tolerate Eclipse: Chapter 27 -- Needs · 2:12pm Jun 16th, 2018

You have them, but they’re not what you think they are.

Bella drives home and heads to her room, sobbing. I couldn’t care less. She realizes she’s been a horrible person, trying to stay with both Edward and Jacob even though she knew that was impossible. By not choosing, she kept on hurting them. That’s the only reason she’s a horrible person? I would’ve thought it was also her obsession with boys and mistreatment of her father, among other things.

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Jan
14th
2017

Advice Please · 8:38pm Jan 14th, 2017

Hi. I'm asking all my watchers something quite important.
The way Lost Reflections is playing out, is there any advice you'd give me?
The last chapters was quite a pivotal moment as it hereby ended the running theme of not knowing why the main villain is so reviled.
I just need to know if I went a bit OTT or if I've missed anything out or anything you'd recommend.

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Oct
24th
2016

I'm still learning · 6:42pm Oct 24th, 2016

I am still a beginner when it comes to writing. I have limited experience and I have put some work into it for 2-3 years at best.
So I try to improve by experimenting.
My recent stories are the result of this and I'm happy to see that those results are rather well liked. I hope I'll keep getting better, chapter by chapter, story by story. Thank for your comments and tokens of appreciation, it helps a lot.

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May
18th
2018

In Which I Tolerate Eclipse: Chapter 13 -- Newborn · 2:05pm May 18th, 2018

Guess what time it is! Well, okay, I guess it is five o’clock somewhere, but that’s not what I mean. Not only is it backstory time, but we get a truly fantastic entry in the Awesome Stuff That Twilight Never Uses Series!

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Jun
8th
2018

In Which I Tolerate Eclipse: Chapter 23 -- Monster · 11:05am Jun 8th, 2018

Bella wakes up in the morning. The storm’s blown itself out. Three solid pages of Edward and Jacob attempting to poison each other with testosterone before Jacob finally leaves. Ugh.

Pain crackled down my spine and lodged in my stomach as I abruptly realized that this could be the last time I would see him.

CM + 1

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May
12th
2018

In Which I Tolerate Eclipse: Chapter 10 -- Scent · 3:26pm May 12th, 2018

For some reason, Edward leaves before Jacob arrives. He says that, although he doesn’t feel any personal antagonism for Jacob, it’s easier for them. Whatever. As long as they’re not trying to out-macho each other, I’m good. Edward pops out and Jacob pops in. Jacob’s still shirtless, although we actually get an explanation this time: his clothes don’t change when he does, so keeping the number of clothing items down reduces the number of things he has to take off or replace when he gets wolfy.

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Jun
12th
2018

In Which I Tolerate Eclipse: Chapter 25 -- Mirror · 10:52am Jun 12th, 2018

In spite of Victoria being decapitated, Edward refuses to take chances and quickly dismembers her body. Once he’s done with that, he goes to Seth and helps him do the same with Riley. They gather all the pieces and burn them. Can’t fault them for being thorough, at least.

The thick smoke curled up slowly, looking more solid than it should; it smelled like burning incense, and the scent was uncomfortable. It was heavy, too strong.

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Oct
21st
2021

My Brony Experience · 5:08am October 21st

Let’s go back to around 1990-2010 (trying to keep privacy as much as possible) where I was pretty young, so, before G4 existed there was video store where you would rent videos. I used to go straight to the children/family section and go to where the My Little Pony (G1) DVD’s were and pick one to take home.

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Nov
13th
2018

Thought experiment #2: Chariot License · 3:28pm Nov 13th, 2018

Time for another thought experiment in pegasus flight. They’re pretty complicated creatures, these pegasi, aren’t they?

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May
29th
2018

In Which I Tolerate Eclipse: Chapter 18 -- Instruction · 3:35pm May 29th, 2018

Come the end of the party, Bella’s still panicking about the wolves joining in. She thinks they’re “just oversized, over-muscled children”, completely forgetting that they can turn into bear-size wolves and have already killed at least one vampire. She insists on Edward taking her to the werewolf-vampire meeting to try to calm her nerves.

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Jun
2nd
2018

In Which I Tolerate Eclipse: Chapter 20 -- Compromise · 2:24pm Jun 2nd, 2018

In the opening paragraph, it’s mentioned that the youngest werewolves are only thirteen. Why didn’t anyone wolf out while the Cullens were hanging around? Maybe it’s not vampires that triggers the change, but hostility, since they started changing when the murderous Victoria started hanging around Forks. But that would be attributing intelligence towards this series.

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Jun
4th
2018

In Which I Tolerate Eclipse: Chapter 21 -- Trails · 11:05am Jun 4th, 2018

It’s morning, and Bella’s packing for the trip to the middle of nowhere. There’s a cold storm coming, so she needs to pack warm clothes. She calls Jacob to tell him she’s ready, but Billy answers instead. He promises to pass the message along and wishes he could be out there with the wolves.

The urge to fight must be a defining characteristic of the Y chromosome. They were all the same.

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Sep
3rd
2019

So far · 9:47am Sep 3rd, 2019

I have begun work on my latest chapter of The Farmer and the god, and so far i like how it is turning out. I have been lucky to have gotten some feedback and i am taking it all into account when i write.

One said i should cut down on the southern accent as it can be hard to read, or at the very least disturb one's reading experience. So i have tried cutting it down in chapter 4 and made some corrections in the last few chapters.

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