Rage Review: Resist and Bite (Chapter 11, Part C) · 11:09am Apr 9th, 2020
Chapter 11: Rough negotiations in the Changeling Kingdom (Part C)
Chapter 11: Rough negotiations in the Changeling Kingdom (Part C)
Chapter 10, "Rough talk with the griffons," Part C
Now we go to the POV of the Bad Guys.
Back in the military headquarters in Canterlot.
Where?
Seriously, Story can't seem to make up its mind over whether the Chinese have set up their main HQ in Canterlot or in Ponyville. The key seems to be that the invaders occupied "Twilight's castle," and Author seems to be unsure about just which castle this happens to be.
Chapter 16: Slavery experience (Part B)
It's the Slavery Experience! Get on board the ship for the onerous Middle Passage! Then get auctioned and sold away from all your friends and loved ones for a hopeless life of servitude!
Wow, that got dark fast.
So Charlie and Sunburst get to their literal slave labor together.
Chapter 12: Failed confrontations in the dragons land
Charlie and Luster Dawn both have been following the long blue stream leading to the Dragons Land for six minutes now.
Six WHOLE minutes! Wow, if they've been galloping along a good road, they've gotten, what, 2-3 whole miles by now!
While they were walking, Charlie had a very disconsolated expression because he remembered what the Chinese soldier said about him and his family,
Chapter 13: Slavery in Canterlot (Part A)
TRAILER: Slavery in Canterlot, the new epic by Cecil B. DeMille and Michael Bay! See the thrilling tale of inequine cruelty and steamy passions from the Primal Plains! See a proud and lovely mare reduced to writhing servitude by the lash! See one brave stallion stand up and break his chains to fight for freedom!
Introduction: This, um, unique gem of a fanfic came to my attention in a thread on another site, and has nothing to do with the actual Rage Reviews group. The story itself is available here.
Description:
After the final song of My Little Pony friendship is magic, ...
A curious basis for a chronology, but okay ...
Chapter 8: Arrival in the Kirin village
Captain Lau unsurprisingly reports to General Jin what happened. Jin is, also unsurprisingly, unhappy at Lau's failure.
It's that time to reveal who our girls are going up against individually! Head down below to check out who Applejack will be facing off against!
Well, good news, the Heroes of Bite Apple is finished, proofread and ready for release next Tuesday.
Thank you all so much for your support. I hope that you will all enjoy the story when it comes out. I have another quick (hopefully) project that I plan on talking about soon, so stick around for that.
I hope you all have a great day.
The first thing Bender ever said on Futurama.
Heyo, peoples.
Just a quick heads up. I had a few people ask if I could toss a little extra time to the contest deadline. Originally I was deadset on keeping it at the end of February, but after remembering the last couple contests I entered and how I was the straggler, figured I may as well pass some good karma along.
Chapter 11: Rough negotiations in the Changeling Kingdom (Part A)
Charlie and Luster Dawn are trying to contact the Changelings.
Charlie and Luster Dawn both have been following the green stream and walking in the everfree forest for fifty minutes, and Luster Dawn had a fatigue expression on her, except for Charlie, he is still in good health and is very vibrant because he needs to keep pushing himself forward in order to rescue the land from the Chinese.
These aren't new, but they are positively inspiring.
They make me feel things.
Things that feel like they'd make excellent words.
Stay classy.
-Fuzz
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As the title says the 2nd half of my story, the Heroes of Bite Apple is here.
Please go ahead and check out this story.
I hope that you all have a wonderful day.
Well, the next chapter is ready, still needs to be edited, but it requires a little bit of an explenation.
You see, I started writing an epilogue, but my brain put that on hold, and told me: "wait, bro. Before you get to this, you need one more chapter. Just a little bit more to explain some things."
Story review #9: The Bug and the Wanderer —By Thesane1
Character’s:
Chrysalis: She is angry, dedicated, and obviously loves the hive. She’s perfectly in character in my book! Especially if her invasion force had died after the battle. And because she is much like her Canon self I give the author a thumbs-up 👍
My story, the Heroes of Bite Apple is finally here.
If you want to read a story where you're in a post apocalyptic Equestria with a monster mare accompanying you through the ashen wastes, then this is the story for you. Enjoy.
Chapter 16 posted in The Runaway Bodyguard. Somepony had been watching Starlight. He knows the name Gelding. A gang-member wanting retribution? Next (Ch 17), Starlight gets goaded into a fight and learns she isn't that good.