Okay, so a little bit of an explenation... · 5:42pm Apr 6th, 2016
Well, the next chapter is ready, still needs to be edited, but it requires a little bit of an explenation.
You see, I started writing an epilogue, but my brain put that on hold, and told me: "wait, bro. Before you get to this, you need one more chapter. Just a little bit more to explain some things."
Anyway, I love the general direction of this chapter, but it needs a few things. Things that, unfortunately, I am too tired to give it right now. You can take a look, make suggestions, but know that I haven't even done any basic editing yet. I'll still be eternally grateful for any suggestions you'd like to make, but remember that I'm probably not going to be able to get to this until at least tomorrow after work.
Thanks in advance for your help, guys
I may have gone a bit overboard with replacing double-spaces with single-spaces.
Two spaces between sentences is proper.
I am liking this direction! the delving into his more personal past is so long over due. thank you good sir!
3852643 Debatable. In reality, it depends more on which professor is teaching your class. Related issues include: leading, and the Xxford comma
3852861 Yeah. I know it can go either way. The import bit is be consistent.