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And things get better. And worse. And... better?
Did I mention how much I love Sickle? Because I just found out I love her a bit more than that.
I can just see somewhere in the future her speaking to Chrysalis: "You are but a chrysalis that failed it's metamorphosis, and my whisper commands armies."
.....dude were you like, waiting for someone to ask before updating?
Lol
Well! Don't look a gift horse in the mouth as they say! TIME TO READ!!!
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Hah, somehow I had missed your post before putting it up! Good timing, I guess
I'm just gonna leave these here for the march
VName of the song in english: Go in to battle boldlyV
And for the final piece i have this :3
I was wondering how long it would take Whisper to take up the mantle of queen. I hope she realises that she's stuck with it now, whether she wants it or not. She should have learned years ago that the only reward for doing good work is more work. Up next: promotion to leader of the... I dunno what you would call this group. But whatever it is, she's about to become its leader.
At least he bit with getting assassinated didn't go as poorly as I expected it to. I was half expecting this chapter to start with Starlight in third person or some shit. And don't think I didn't notice that the only leader to not get injured in some way was Sandstorm. Gotta keep up that disguise until the last minute...
I'm kind of suspicious of Bloodbeak's sudden addition.
this seems appropriate...
Thank you so much for the unsuspected birthday present!
Damn awesome man! DAMN AWESOME!!! xd
But now I finished the chapter! NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! LOL
I can't decide if this the biggest or second greatest cliffhanger so far. Xp
I'm hyped now! The next chapter can't come quick enough!!!
Did you just reference Murky Number 7? Sickle Brimstone and Rampage walk into a bar. Hahahha that would be a sight to see.
The ponies go marching one by one hoorah hoorah.
Well awesome we're reaching the climax.
Great chapter, looking foward to the next one. I can't remember if you had said in the story how queen where selected. But I know in insects if there is no queen they can make one out of a drone most of the time. But I can't remember if you made anything canon to that point or not.
Bloodbeak is either Red Spy or New Gabby. We're all hoping for the latter of course, but...yeah.
Still suspicious of Sandstorm. She never disrupted herself, her original plan was to throw the collective force of Trotsen in a suicidal charge without even listening to details, apparently while also trading for a good chunk of Mareford's ordnance, and the only reason that didn't happen was because Whisper went for more friends. She would've been in the perfect position to hand Serenity most of the tech that could've been used against them, and remains in a perfect position to sneak the assassins into Mareford. "Surviving" an attempt at the cost of a real guard and a real assassin would ingratiate herself to the entire surviving army just in case they got their shit back together.
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I've yet to read that one (It's on the list, I swear!), so I'm afraid I'm not sure what the reference would be
🤔
Love this story my dude, keep up the good work
Well that worked out a lot better than I was fearing. I suppose a near-death experience is a good incentive to get your priorities straight about the future. All Hail Queen Whisper!
I suppose it's too much to hope for similarly speedy updates? You're actually really fast with updates compared to most authors, but I definitely love how we've had two chapters in one week!
Yay!
It started like huh?
And ended all bad flank.
Whoop!
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Heh, I wish I could put out chapters that quickly on a regular basis. No, sadly, I'm not going to be able to keep it going that frequently. This was a special case. Don't worry, it won't be nearly as bad as last term, but I'd guess about 2-3 weeks between chapters.
(Promptly disappears for 3 more months)
war never changes
... i think i feel teased... i do so hope that that queen form imitation was but a prelude to a real transformation into a proper changeling queen. if its not and she never transforms into a queen. i think i will feen thoroughly teased. that being said, i absolutely LOVE this story so far. keep up the good work. and i love how sickle is like "QUIET!!! my whisper wants to speak."
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Read it you're gonna laugh at the choice of Bloodletters.
I knew Sickle would shout that when Whisper got ignored the second time
Whisper got the best friends.
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I expected a bullet barrage to the ceiling tbh. Or some sort of magical silencer from echo.
You know, I suspect for most individuals there, civilians or armed forces, there is a sense of overwhelming awe at what has transpired here, for it is likely that all memories of what war truly was has faded to legend. Likely there's a bit of dread as well considering the last war is what caused the wasteland to exist in the first place. I am curious though, what will happen when information of what transpired here reaches the ears of ol' Pip and her allies.
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Seems odd that if she was an infiltrator for the Serenity, why would she kill another individual who was part of her hive? Due to cultural values, I suspect that the only individual capable of being willing to do such would be the Queen caste of changeling, which is doubtful in the extreme that Chrysalis the 6th would have the necessary time to take to the field herself while there are operations running in areas outside the potential infiltration site. The original Chrysalis invaded Canterlot whilst Equestria was unified with the invasion site as the capital when the leadership of the entire nation was likely to be in attendance, meaning success would be liable to be a decapitation strike for the nation, which was the end goal for the campaign. Now, compare that to the wasteland, which is divided into multiple city-states where the destruction of a single city does not markedly impact the situation for their neighbors, meaning she has many different ops going at any one time, and the monofocus the original Chrysalis did makes no sense in this situation.
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Assuming she is a spy, Whisper backed her into a corner over that agent and forced a confrontation. As she would be the more valuable position, she'd have to sacrifice the pawn to keep her own cover and ensure the situation stayed under her own control.
Just because Trotsen is one fractured city-state among many and underequipped compared to Serenity doesn't mean it's not important for the changelings to keep under control. As Whisper's showing right now, things can balloon quickly once they're out in the open.
Wisper keeps saying that she isnt special, that she is an ordinary changling infiltrator, i am... unconvinced. She was selected to be in the same facility as her queen. She is quite obviosly more skilled then she lets on. I think queen ephy knew something about our little wisper. Something she dosnt know about herself. If i had to guess at what her S.P.E.C.I.A.L stats were focused in... i would say charisma, inteligence, and agility with a fair amount of points in perception.
And now we’re back to playing the waiting game...
Amazing chapter as always
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That's allright, I've yet to see a sane ghoul.
By the end of this, I wouldn't be suprised if Whisper became a fully-fledged changeling queen. Somehow. The specifics I am at a loss to speculate on. But hey, she's already playing the part: the equipment to go with it would only make it easier.
haven't read this yet but I hope the changeling uses her shape shifting a lot.
demit now I want to go to the FO:E vers as a changeling and fuck with pony's big time ( no not fuck them but mess with their heads. get you mind out of the gutter. )
Damn it. Now I have to wait.
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Oh but you'd be missing out on all that juicy love
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haha ya I guess it make some friends for some love.
oh maybe try and infiltrate the enclave.
and steal their awesome power armor.
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Coming back after nearly completing the story thus far, I'm almost shocked to see just how spot on I was about her character...
I loooove bloodbeak. So want her to snuggle whisper x3
You know your Fallout Equestria fic is going to war for extinction if the token gryphon finally joins the crew.
To be honest I completely forgot when did they met Bloodbeak before? In the Swamp/Jungle with the Zebras?
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Yep, that's the place
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Ahh, okay, now I see the connection. Why do I feel her easygoing nature kindda predicts that she's gonna get used?
cant wait for a new chapter' i'm so exited. i want to see whisper kick some flank
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Well aren't you the intuitive little smart cookie.
I kinda already knew this, but it's always nice to be able to have a screenshot detailing them in a nutshell.
You done gud, bro
When next AWESOME update?
Yiiikes. Damage, indeed.
Why take her out though? Her role in the whole thing was pretty much played out.
...it wasn't just her they targeted, was it?
Aw yiss, Sickle!
Sounds healthy
Heehee. Supportive Sickle.
Boooooyah. I love this mare.
I was wondering when this would come up
Oh, right
Uh-oh. No wait. You're in no condition to...
Goddammit. This isn't a disguise, is it? She actually transformed into a Queen...
"Well, the Queen part is new."
Wait, it was a bluff?! Wow
True, true...
Plot twist: every changeling queen just pretends to be that big using transformation magic
But of course
Bwahaha
Yep.
Royal guards. I called that
Ooh. Good thinking.
Queen Whisper, Leader of the Joint Anti-Serenity Forces?
Yes, that's definitely the real Bloodbeak
Welp. Some serious shit's going to go down now, pones!
Remarks and corrections:
> I weazed, fighting off the sudden urge to cough.
"I wheezed"
Dramatic time to catch up, looks like.
When's the next AWESOME exciting chapter?
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You could not have possibly downgraded my entire sentence in any more effective way.
I know that, but a mini nuke will still itch Nuke Ghandi's trigger finger
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you are great at making me laugh my guts out ^_^
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Thanks. I don't even try. Really.
There's this guy making the same claims who is reading Austraeoh
That awful moment when you realize you've caught up to the story's current progress and now have to wait.
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I'd like to see you go into a tigers den bored. See how far that gets you.
No offense, I'd totally buy tickets to that show!
So what's the latest news on this story?