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HOLY JESUS. What a chapter.
Pretty sure that "he" should be "she". Pesky pronouns.
THIS is how you write a crescendo.
Damn. All that buildup, and it ends by putting some bullets in a sleeping 'ling. I guess that really is a very Whisper way of doing things.
Ahhhwowza. Okay.
She's good
You had me worried there for a second
Ohhh ouch!
Yup. Was thinking that too. Better not to let all this new stuff you're building lean on a rotten pillar.
Saw that coming. I hope she's more willing to negotiate than her queen
That doesn't bode well, heh. Though I guess it is the logical reaction when trying to retain control.
Oh, now there's an interesting development
Then again, not too surprising, considering Emerald came from there. There had to be other ways of thinking already going around in the hive.
Welp, that didn't turn out so well for them
Y'know, if they don't execute her on the spot... this Coxa may be worth rescuing
Well, whoops. If you wanna save them, better hurry.
Alas. The bomb is already dropped on it
Too bad you put that bomb on the megaspell. This would be the perfect moment to lob it into that room
Crrrrrrrap.
And a mere moment later, so was the hive.
Was totally expecting something too go wrong with the Detonator even though its clearly the end :P
My heart feels like a jackhammer.