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I like how simple, how clinical this is. Its so brutal, uncompromising, and it works so damn well. Bravo!
You dropped a space.
People letting you go wherever you want unchallenged, just because you look like you're supposed to be there? Actually analyzing the writing style of someone before planting fake writings? Collecting spent brass? Your continued attention to realism brings me much joy.
Bait and switch! Man, I can't believe I was fooled. I doubt I would have been if I was reading the chapters one after another, or if you didn't publish two chapters at once (making it appear as if this was an optional chapter about some random wastelander), but as it stood I had no idea Lemon was Whisper. The third-person narration was a nice touch.
Oh no... With Whisper's luck regarding changelings, that changeling was a decendant of her Hive, not Chrysalis'.
Short but to the point chapter. I love it! I'm going to save the next chapter for later, as I don't want the words to end so soon, but be assured that I am quite excited to read what happens next! So happy you did a double-post considering how short this chapter was.
More changelings!
This infiltration mission was perfect except for the lack of cardboard boxes
TWO CHAPTERS?!
2 Chapters on my birthday. I couldn't have asked for anything else. thank you
The only thing I don't like about this story... is that I'm almost at the end of what's currently written! TxT ... I'll have to turn to an RP I'm currently making for my 'changeling fallout fix' XD
Lemon Tart for best pony
Wait, you all were surprised? I mean, I never suspected Runner or anything but when it happened I was just like "Yeah, this completely checks out."
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*mind Grumpy cat's name - Tard.
Nice assassination sequence.
Good job, Whisper, now you killed a potentially completely innocent changeling yourself.
I'll laugh cruelly if it was one from her own hive.
And that, my freinds, is how you fuck the system, like a Sandy bitch.
Focus. Adapt. Proceed. You're fucked. Finish the job. Get laid. Start the next day with no memory and continue to wate-land your life away.
Hah. I can already guess who that is.
First step of a successful infiltration: act like you belong where you need to get into
Ow. Brutal!
Oh wow. The nerve
Man, this is some stone cold assassination And disguised as her lover, even! This is Fullmetal Alchemist homunculus levels of brutality
Oh. Crap.
That is, of course, if there ever was a real Wild Runner...
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The serenity hive is using the replacement method because they want to kidnap ponies for love (and they follow chrysalys' methods) the idea of faking a customized pony is a more time consuming method with less immediate rewards.
(Not saying its not done/implausible, but that whisper is fairly safe in assuming it was a replacement)
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No, I just meant, like Emerald. But given the position of power, chances of a Serenity infiltrator there are indeed far higher than chances of another rogue. And given the fact it's just about getting into a position of authority, I doubt they'd bother to kidnap the pony... don't think the real Wild Runner would still be alive.
It’s terrifying how dangerous changelings really are. Now the question is was runner always a changeling which is what I believe or was she replaced. I love the whole fallout 4 feel ancient Pre-War organization that replaces people in society and are fully functional with modern and even advancing technology.
"Heavily defended," Whisper? Against a pre-apocalypse-trained changeling infiltrator? Is it normal for post-apocalypse backwaters to plan their operations around the off chance a resurrected 200 year old professional will pop up?
I love myself a bit of citrus tang, so once agian would have really liked if the whole chapter was in 3rd person Lemon view, and only after jumping out the window, turning into a pegasus did the reader get their stomach feeling of it being Whisper confirmed. Your plot was such a slow burn, so I am surprised how yoy can't take it slow now and really go al in when you really hit gold like this.
I agree. Chapter was a bit bland but I guess it can't be helped. You can't write every chapter to be exciting.