I don't know what to tell you, so here's one of Maud Pie's poems. (It's about rocks. They're all about rocks.) "Rock. You are a rock. Grey. You are grey. Like a rock. Which you are. Rock." Solid work.
Dark9 stories -
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I don't usually dig GrimDark, but sometimes a dark story really impresses me with its creativity. Like all my Shelves, this is fairly arbitrary, and it will probably contain stories with many elements other than just Dark.
Twilight's convinced Discord hasn't really reformed, and has found a weapon to replace the Elements -- a reforming spell Discord missed eating. But a cornered draconequus is a dangerous beast...