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I wonder what type o angle it might appear to be from his perspective? In the case of the CMC maybe it's acute one?
Hmm.... is this Pinkie the Pinkie after her jaunt to alt-earth? Or is this a substitute Pinkie?
6474700 According to YE TIME LINE, it's been a while since Pinkie ran off. She did that before Silver got back, and before Twilight had her foal. So, ultimately, a good question.
But will I answer? Probably, in future chapters!
6474705 Indeed, indeed. We can only wait for confirmation. Until then... RAMPANT THEORIZING!
Yep, definitely not Pinkie if she didn't recognize him, changeling perhaps?
I bet Tumble is with a certain Anubian.....
Keep going! ;)
a really good chapter good work.
but what has pinkie all down in the flanks? this can't be a good thing.
Harts Fire
6475064 Hmm? Pinkie seemed pretty chipper to me.
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to quote the all mighty text.
Wispy sensed something immediately... off. He couldn't put a hoof on it, but something about Pinkie just felt deeply wrong
6475089 Oh sure, off, wrong, but not down!
It's going to be fun to see how much trouble he can git into as a earth pony. keep up the good work you are doing.
Dragonfox
6476733 Thanks for the kind words. I think we (Silver/Wispy) and I are kind of enjoying powered down shenanigans.
He worked on "them" quietly for a moment.
Needs punctuation at the end of the sentence.
Capitalize the first letter of Scootaloo's name.
6497922 Fixed!
6497942 Well now, with the characters winding down their various reunions, plot threads are starting to seep back in! I have to say that it's good to see mysteries start to be introduced again, along with hints of older threads that have since advanced. Good stuff here!
The part with Twilight at the beginning was the weakest part of this chapter. I'm guessing that she recognized him by his cutie mark, but that's not at all a certainty; it's just the only way I can guess that she recognized him in that form, since she shouldn't have otherwise. That said, her berating him about his lack of decorum felt...weird. This is the same Twilight that had no problems turning herself and her friends into breezies that one time? Or had no problem helping Applejack dig a hole in the ground (if I recall correctly) to avoid going home in Castle Sweet Castle? Her entire lecture about Silver needing to retain his alicorn form just felt out-of-character for her.
The bit with the preening was nicely sexy, though the part about how Silver's so good at it when the professional preeners weren't was a bit of a thing. I'm not sure what we were supposed to take away from that; are Lotus and Aloe making a deliberate effort not to have their preening feel sexually arousing?
That said, things picked up fast when the CMC came on the scene. When serving as supporting cast members (rather than being the stars of a given narrative) they work best by stirring up trouble, and that was the case here. It was a lot of fun to see Silver (er, Wispy) see through their scheme and point out just how harebrained it really was, much to the fillies' chagrin. That really felt like it was true to their characters without necessarily being stuck in the tropes that they engage in. That's how to use an existing character.
It also served very well to subtly reintroduce the whole issue with Applejack and Rainbow Dash being in a relationship and wanting a foal, a plot-thread that started out being very fun, quickly became something of a mess, and was summarily dropped like a rock before anything was completely resolved. I personally liked that idea, at least before it became completely and utterly tangled up in itself, as it dealt with a core relationship issue of the strains it places on a couple when they have different ideas about having children, as well as have trouble having children. Silver's serving as a stud was also a great way to inject him into that drama, and was one of the main reasons why I think that having him be unable to father children was a bad idea. That particular issue had a lot of room for great character drama, but that apparently won't happen now.
Ah well, at least there's something mysterious going on with Pinkie Pie. I call changeling!
6497983 I believe the word you're looking for is 'hypocritical' rather than 'out of character'. She appeared with an alarmed expression. She didn't just wander over him and spotted his cutie mark, she heard about it, likely from Fast Change directly, and had an objection. She was quite hypocritical in her berating, but not out of character.
The CMC were CMCing it up, and I loved them, but it would have been bad to have Silver chasing after them with impure desires, so it's probably best he saw what they were up to before it was unleashed upon him. It's not that kind of fic, eh?
What shall happen next?!
Reminds me of this story.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/23609/never-judge-a-book-by-its-cover
*Face palms*
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