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Dayum. That was a pretty brutal fight sequence there. Including the brutalist place you could possibly put the cliffhanger.
.... "And you just sit there WAIT for me to write what happens next!"
6666285 I keep the momentum going, I hope.
Ok. THAT WAS AWESOME!! Can you update with the next chapter now, please?
Silly ponies. I can think of at least three ways to stop arrows in a barrage like that, even if they are tipped with null-stones, right off the top of my head. Flash fire wall in the line of fire, an ice wall, or an earth wall. Okay, two then. The first one isn't really that easy to pull off unless your Celestia or a fire elemental... Besides, if I can think of those, I bet Silver thought of even more since her first encounter with them. (Null-stones I mean... Unless I am mixing my Fimfiction stories a bit... oh well!) On second thought... I think I am mildly mixing this story with the reformation of the hive series and it's prequels a bit. Oops.
6666556 I don't think I used any fancy arrows in this fic, though we did have a hive of changelings being brought in peacefully.
broken rib - broken ribs
Another excellently written chapter. The pacing kept me on edge and I was at the end before I knew it was approaching.
As I was driving home tonight I heard something on the radio that gave me pause. "Diplomacy does not work without leverage."
The enemy has Morning Glory as leverage against Silver, and they have used it to their advantage. Even as he struggles to reclaim their foal, he plays by their rules and at their pace.
At this point the only leverage Silver seems to have against his enemies it the threat and careful application of force and violence. The enemy seems to have the clearly stronger position by far. What can possibly be leveraged against an organization such as this, that is willing and, more troubling, able to kid...er... foalnap the child of two alicorns with powerful herd members, and direct support of the highest powers in Equestria?
Hopefully a sharp mind like Night Watch will realize that they need something more substantial to balance the equation, and hopefully something will shake loose during this bout of open conflict, a bit of information, a chance observation as the agents of the enemy scramble to react.
Of course this is all only solid reasoning for humans, pony psychology is still an unknown variable for me.
Sorry for the long commentary, I hope it isn't unwelcome. I love this story!
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It's the fanfiction equivalent of 'bullet time'
6666855 Another typo was found and fixed while fixing this one. And no! God no! I absolutely adore thoughts and theories on what I write. You've made my day.
Wave one completed! Wave two begins in two, one...
Just what would the idiot secretary think local law enforcement could do? Surely by the time they mobilize the conflict would be over?
Crossbows, how quaint! :pa simple elastic prism reflection shield is highly effective against projectile weapons, so long as you have the energy reserve for it.
Keep going! ;)
This is why I wish you named your chapters. It makes them easier to navigate if I want to reread parts.