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Honestly...the things those nobles did are high treason and no one is taking care of that?
6615937 There was one angry noble. Why the plural? Did the others do something?
Hmm, Silver is to Jack Harkness as _______ is to the Doctor? Hmm, who best to fill that role.
6615957 knowing you <.< there are likely more.
Pretty sure that even in Equestria covert recording of a private event is no joke, that mare is way out of line...
Keep going! ;)
6616171 A very naughty mare that made Luna quite angry.
6615937 Are you assuming the assassination attempts were from the nobles? I don't think anything that happened in this chapter was treasonous, just rude.
6616189 Would you really put it pass them?
a vary lovely chapter super good work.
I wish you a speedy recovery DS.
Harts Fire
PS was Fleur flirting with the princesses?
I wish something interesting would happen to me, like an adventure. Hell I would even settle for something terrifying happening to me as in something terrifying that has a chance of me dyingb as is my life is dull and the misery lessened. Which makes me bored and progressively angrier at the little things. But no I'm not suicidal I just want actual I'm gonna die fear not eww creepy bugs are crawling all over me fear.
ponies
hers. (Here, it's a pronoun.)
That's a rather redundant way of phrasing it. It'd sound more natural if it was something like "thoughts of you have filled my mind."
You don't need "across" after "caressed."
So we finally start getting some repercussions to Silver's crisscrossing gender roles.
I'm honestly surprised that this hasn't happened (very much) up until now. Certainly, Equestria is far and away a more loving and open society than virtually any on Earth, but at some point there's only so libertine you can get before you start to upset someone. Particularly amongst nobility, who have a vested interest in retaining the current social structures (since they're near the top of them). Given this, I have to wonder just how much Celestia's predictions (from so long ago) about that gender-bending spell of Silver's causing social repercussions for stallions will come true. That's not so much a problem of gender roles as it is social dynamics; when the reproductive functions of males can be usurped by females - in a society that's already dominated by females - it's not hard to understand why some might start getting nervous.
To be fair, no one else is still using that spell (except Lyra), but now that Luna's thoughts have been eavesdropped on, and recorded, it's going to get out that she and Silver and swapping who's the male and who's the female. At that point it'll be kind of hard to maintain any sort of serious ban on that spell, since if two royals are doing it, it won't be seen as wrong. If Lyra ever lets it slip out, it'll spread pretty rapidly, or so I'd imagine, and then the social positions of stallions everywhere will begin to wane.
I get that, in the immediate future, everything seems fine; after all, that stallion was clearly telegraphing that he had gender identity issues, but even doing something with the best of intentions can lead to unintended consequences, sometimes seriously so.
More amusing was Fleur; she was quite clearly turned on by the thoughts of new sexual activities, in contrast to her husband, who seemed more reserved about such thoughts. She was always slightly narcissistic and self-absorbed before, and it's amusingly appropriate to consider that she's still that way now. I won't go so far as to call her debauched, but dangling an entirely new area of sexual activity before her certainly makes it seem like she wouldn't mind acting that way, at least for a while.
6928300 Fleur and her husband are always treats to write for, even if I don't think Hasbro ever formally declared their relation as anything but 'close together in those scenes', or did they?
Every action has a reaction, even if not immediate, or obvious. Not a single step without something taking note of it, and to try to claim no involvement is dodging responsibility. Silver is learning this, bit by bit..
6628212 Your thoughts worry me. Don't let the small things gather up & consume you, dispel them as fast as possible & forget them, they are not worthy. Make your own adventures but as I learned you have to still mind your limits both physically & financially but not mentally, just make them good enough to outweigh anything bad that comes along. Life isn't life if you don't enjoy it so enjoy!!
Pretty sure listening in on royals private conversation is espionage. So OFF WITH THAT MARES HEAD! SHE IS GUILTY OF TREASON! Seriously such a device would not be aloud in any government building.
7254003 Pony justice is odd justice.
It’s like sugar, spice, and everything nice!
……………Oh I get it.
Shouldn't that be: Silver settled beside
or as a possible alternative "Silver sat directly beside"
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Years and hundreds of ponies, but you spotted it.