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Luna is dead, the main five (i meant six) hate each other, Celestia tried to murder fluttershy, Timber wolves took over Equestria, pony's are near extinction, and worst of all Discord doesn't care.
Why the hell did I type this comment
Her forearms and shins were still furry and "animal-like."
"Loincloth" is a compound word.
There are two spaces between "you" and "would."
The "still-moaning" pegasus.
6255788 Typos challenged to a duel!
I'm beginning to think that 'spirit' is linked to that near human form...
6255830 Maybe.
So is that the 3rd or 4th time his dick has saved him? Cool fight chapter and just what is she planing?
6256254 What were the other times? It got him raped while bleeding to death before, to my recollection.
6255828 This was a very good chapter! When done well, a fight scene can be a captivating spectacle as we see two skilled combatants go up against each other, watching the tactics displayed in the point-counterpoint exchange. That's especially true when at least one of them is a known quantity, and we get to see how well/creatively they can use their existing abilities. That was done here to great effect.
What was most obvious was how we got to see Silver reach deep into his bag of tricks to try and defeat Nefertari. I think that he used literally every single spell we've ever seen him cast in this fight, and much to my delight, virtually none of them were effective. I call that delightful because heroes should always be underdogs, in my opinion. I was very invested in Silver's victory here because it seemed so difficult to reach, which made it all the more worthwhile that he managed to pull it off in the (or rather, her) end.
And make no mistake, Nefertari showed herself to be a force to be reckoned with here. I'm really becoming quite taken with her character, as she's displaying playfulness mixed with confidence that it really makes her alluring without seeming flirtatious, as well as dominant without being overly arrogant. That's hard enough to do normally, but here she was able to back it up masterfully, playing up the "magic as physical enhancement" theme of how she fights, along with a handful of utility magic to do things like quench flames. Putting a lot of her tricks out in the open like this was perfectly-timed too, since there's only so long you can tread on innuendo the way she was prior to this. Now we know that for all her sexy cooing and teasing, she can absolutely throw down when it's called for.
Of course, the one thing she apparently wasn't ready for was the extremely-indirect nature of Silver's super-enhanced pheromones, which ultimately led to him doing her right there. That was out-and-out stated to be a win...except it quite clearly was not. That was almost confusing, but ultimately I decided that it made sense. After all, the implication was that this fight was until the loser was unable to fight anymore (e.g. lost consciousness) or surrendered. Presumably, Nefertari putting her butt in the air and letting Silver fill her with his seed counts as surrendering, except that he did so with magic, and once the effect wore off she was quite clearly still willing to keep up the struggle. As such, I'm a little torn on whether or not she's committing a faux paus in still fighting; after all, letting your opponent fuck you is kind of an admission of loss (and in her war form, no less!). Plus, using a hostage doesn't seem like the kind of honorable one-on-one fight that we've seen until now.
Presuming she is stepping out of bounds though, it's also starting to become clear why she is. There's a prophecy in play here - apparently about a pony warrior - and she's apparently trying to figure out if it's him. Moreover, she's becoming frustrated that she can't...push him to a place of unbridled anger/desperation? Because that seems to be what she's trying to do, or at least I presume so, since she was threatening that pegasus's life if he didn't "accept he challenge," which seems weird, since that's sort of what he did in fighting her. What other challenge has she put forward for Silver to accept?
Other than ending on such an ambiguous note, I really liked how this went. This was Silver, for once, not being afraid of his own strength, and using it in a very satisfying mixture of fighting and fucking. While she's not ready to wag her tail for him yet, Nefertari might be the first literal conquest he's ever had.
Silver has won a small battle but not the war.
6256274 I thought that he was being rutted so much that they were too busy to kill him. Plus with the pirates.
6256462 It definately worked with the pirates!
6256423 You raise some good questions that are likely on Silver's mind. He won, damn it, why isn't she giving up? She clearly wants something out of him, something she hasn't quite gotten yet. She still hasn't gone for lethality. She could have killed him, or her. He knows that. He knows that she knows that. He's managed to depower her out of her war form, so that's something, but she has not given up, despite his rutting her silly.
How will it end?
Just what is and expecting him to do? He can't (as far as we know) transform like that, unless she wants to see him morph into an Anthromorphic pony?
Keep going! ;)
Aren’t you talking about the Anubian?
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Fixed in all its naughtiness.
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She’s a jackal?
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Nefertari is a jackal, yes.