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Twilight smash puny ponies!
Super strength, flight,
eyebeamshornbeams. She's Supermanmare!Hells, yeah. Silver done taught Twilight how to be a monster
translation:
"hey, I'm a prince(ss) too!"
6622597 Twilight is so proud.
Interesting, it's like they're testing them. Clearly twilight's captors weren't holding her in hopes she could be "fixed" that easily...
Keep going! ;)
6623269 They sure did let her go relatively easily.
a super chapter and our little Twilight has figured out how to use one of her alicorn magic's. exultant.
Ponies are just ridiculously hypocritical. "We're going to use force to show you how evil force is."
where you once were,
where you're wrong, Princess.
barbarians."
waist
6795168
Harmony...vs. herd mentality (see: "Bridle Gossip")
The spoken line should end with a comma rather than a period, and the subsequent "she" shouldn't be capitalized.
This should be "Goodbye." (Or even "Good-bye.")
So Twilight finds herself surrounded by a group of ponies, which want to "reform" her.
Well, that certainly settles this as being a conspiracy, rather than a lone actor or two. That was particularly notable in that Twilight thought that the mare speaking to her was familiar. However, I'm curious as to what it was they wanted Twilight to watch? What was supposed to be so effective in convincing her that humans were a corruption? I feel like that was supposed to be the pony version of the brainwashing scene from A Clockwork Orange, but the overall effect is dampened by the story never actually telling us what Twilight was being shown.
Instead, we got a great deal of exposition with regards to Twilight figuring out how to use her alicorn magic in the way that an earth pony would. That was somewhat interesting, particularly with regard to how Twilight imagined her friends in order to use that power. I half-expected her to begin tearing into her attackers, but she made the right move in prioritizing her own escape. Getting yourself out of a situation where you're taken captive is exceptionally hard to do, and it's best to retreat to where you have more security and backup than to try and press your luck.
That said, if they got back late enough that Luna is holding court, why had no alarm been sounded? Twilight and Silver were kidnapped on their way to meeting Celestia, who had summoned them. When they didn't show up for that meeting, why didn't Celestia start sounding some alarms? As it stands, it seems like no one even knew they were gone. I can see Celestia not announcing that two princesses...er, one princess and the prince...have been kidnapped, but at least the guards should have been on alert. Instead, Celestia just seems to have gone to bed. Is this a plot-hole, or will there be an explanation next chapter?
6928599 Oh, it is certainly a plot hole. I'm sure you'll eventually see what fills it, eventually.
On the other hoof, it's a plothole that occurs in the actual show pretty commonly. Celestia, never there when you'd like her to be.
I enjoyed that!!