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... the buck? This entire story... all 300+K words, was another one of Celestia's twisted games?
What. The actual. [buysomeapples].
No, no, not at you, David. This is one mind bending twist that (sadly) still fits in with the character of this Celestia. This is all on Sunbutt. Nerfertari, the Saddle Arabian twins, the anthro forms, the Abomination at the bottom of the sea, the turkey's, Celestia and Luna being previous playthings of the Text... that was all part of the dream? 0.o
ACCCCCCCCCCCCCK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow, now that was an epic twist of an ending. I look forward to another story starring Silver where he heals and deals with the aftermath of Celestia's gambit and raises his foals. Mega props for pulling the Matrix on us.
6724031 If you look at it, it was becoming more and more twisted as it went.
It gets a bit scarier with a few things that only some readers ever saw.
6724031 Oh, much more subtle, but you'll notice the story never gained any tags but Celestia.
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Huh? *checks*
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You evil genius, you...
That's quite a punch in the gut.
Should have seen it coming in the way that the story has become increasingly chaotic and erratic, just like a dream that's starting to fall apart as the sleeper climbs towards consciousness. Reminds me in a way of an old TV show, "The Prisoner" actually. Anyway, I was so wrapped up in reading and trying to guess how the story might unfold that I missed or ignored the signs that all was not quite as it seemed.
However, some of Silver's attitude seems to have rubbed off and I can forgive you, the Author, and wait patiently to see what comes next, because dammit, this is some of the best story telling I've read in quite some time.
a wane smile - a wan smile
willed with lies - filled with lies (?) -maybe- wiled (??)
That was a pretty good ending for this part of the story line. Oh, the things that we will see in the next story.
What the actual fuck just happened? My mind, it can't even right now.
Nope, we're not accepting this. Capture and containment method 30 should be effective at the moment, Silver has only now been put in the dream.
Keep going! ;)
Part of me feel happy for Silver...The other part of me just throw its hands on the air and scream "I give up!".
Never trust the sun. I guess it's a good thing I went with Night Watch instead of Nefertari for the latest round of fan-art, since Nef was apparently part of Celestia's mind-fuck. Actually, I totally approve of this twist, because the sun is ALWAYS evil (it just is, moon don't you skin cancer). On the other hand, you have sucked the pinkie pie emotions right out of me. Not even a little smiley at the end. For realsies, you made Nefertari not-real. You also totally ivalidated my fic ("Awkward conversations of the Silververse"). The first chapter ws a fairly hillarious conversation between Rarity and Sweetie Belle that no longer makes sense because that picnic never happened. After all the trolling I got from the Iam Noone stories, it wa HARD to write another story. Now I gotta start over! Loved the chapter BTW. Great twist. But you get ZERO pinkie pie faces for this one. The Cult of the Unspeakable Pinkie Pie is Impressed but decidedly not amused.
it will be sade to see silver go but I will agree with David Silver this time.
it is time for Silver to end.
the Silver series will be missed bye a hole bunch of pony's but I know DS has several more story's to read.
Harts Fire thanks you for all the time and effort you have put in to this super story David.
agene thank you for all your hard work.
Harts Fire
Is this story, marked complete, actually complete this time?
6724507 I'll give you another morsel. The time distortion was a sort of way of showing that things could be edited, people removed, and to see Silver's reaction, since there were a lot of people to remove. He cried, but he moved on. He even made a good recovery. That likely helped reach this conclusion.
So, is this the series end, or do you have plans to continue on from here?
6724789 Only time will tell. I may enjoy having one story to update for a while (Ponyfinder: Roots of Stone).
6724802 - well you've been going full tilt for a while now, so it's more than reasonable that you take a breather. Roots of Stone is a joy to read and still waiting patiently to see if you pick up on Pink Step again too.
I am sorry to see this story end. You did leave a lot of unanswered questions for this story. I Like to know how Princess Celestia sister Luna is going to handle this. Did they not agree to stop tormenting Silver? Celestia has be trade her beloved pony's as well as what she stand for. I can't see this story ending like this. If you do, you need to in the vary lees give an epilogue to tried and give some conclusion to the story. You have left so much up in the air at this time of the story.
Dragonfox
Now I see why the story didn't end after the trip ended
6725469 It should have ended there.
It should have ended after Silver died.
Celestia was caught in her own snare. It was only now that she finally stopped it. She confessed, and set Silver free.
...
*Slowly claps* This is some Shakespearan mind fuckery right here. Reminds me of the ending of that movie, "The Repo Men".
Well done David, well done. This deserves a nobel prize. I missed all the signs... they flew right over my friggin head...
Well, atleast Silver can go back to his family more or less fine... psychologically - not so much. After all this, Silver might do a ritual each day of glaring at the sun and becoming distant to Celestia.
Silver may be ultra forgiving... but there's just things that you should NEVER do to another. Especially if they're human and have a personality akin to Silver's. Celestia betrayed him multiple times but THIS? This is unforgivable.
I wouldn't blame Silver if he suddenly turned into a Nightmare-like thing or suddenly gave up and left Equestria with his family. And who really knows how Luna became Nightmare? Maybe there's more to that than told?
Anyway, sorry for rambling on. I hope there's another sequel planned - Silver should fight the sun.
6730675 A cookie for you if you can say what was being tested just at the end, with the ship.
Re-reading this chapter. Still wrapping my head around it. My initial reaction was, "No shit??? It was a Celestia mind-fuck from chapter one. But it ultimately makes SO muching sense. Muching by the way is how I decided to contract "much fucking". So I started to make a list of things that I have asked to see this chapter. Silver Stars as an anti-hero. Check. Furries (I didn't ask, but I felt like it was always implied). Check. Cthulu being defeated by a musical number. Check. An evil, super proby alien invasion. Check-a-rooni! Silver Stars unleased as the monster he is in defense of his family. Super-Check. And finally, Evil Celestia. Oh the Check of it all. You just won't accept Pinkie Pie as the devil. Because "Pinkie Pie's not evil on purpose", is just where you draw the line. I can respect that. Respectfully agree to disagree. Pinkie Pie just reformed WAY earlier than Discord (there's a reason she's his favorite, and the one he fucks with the least). Reformed evil is still evil, we're just friendlier and more reasonable about it.
All the pinkie Pie faces at once that were frozen in shock apon reading the ending, presented here for your amusement (presented in the order of experiene of said Pinkie Pie Emotions).
Also, you didn't know you needed a blue grass Venom cover song.
Because there is this weirdly awesome crossover with MLP, D&D, and metal. Appropriate given recent revelations, I think.
Shite that's some serious shite right there. Does he at least have the alphabet still memorized?
6745237 That is a great question!
After thinking about this whole situation I somehow remembered this ! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Odyssey_(TV_series)
oO
6757020 Never read/watched that one.
I'm inclined to agree with Silver that this was a bit of a lame ending. At the same time, I get that you might have written yourself into a corner with all this super powered alien stuff.
6757046 that was stupid, you tearned everything into non cannon, i will tell you wheir you dang fucked up, him dying. he was not alive... at all, instead it was chapters whier his friends whier alive and tried to bring him back, it also gave alot of back story to them and an elabret spell can not do that. that is whier i call bullshit altho im sure i can find other areas such as celsetia giving her own blood, still silver was not alive. in all reality what you did was this story was going no whier so you scraped it up, admit it.
Oh look, Badlestia is back. Yawn.
What?!
Did I just waste three days of my life reading a Three Hundred Thirty Five THOUSAND word story consisting of Shit That Did NOT HAPPEN?!
Silver was not the only one that just got mindfucked ...
Edit for continuing stories ... 600 thousand words ...
7728410 Oh, but it did.
WHAT. NO
WHAT THE F*** IS GOING ON!!
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You have survived the dream arc. Now, awaken.
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The story has already moved on quite a long ways from here.