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Ponyville is doomed. The ship's going to suddenly fail completely and fall and crush it.
Ok you took a story that was good and.
well lets say I love sci fy so 2 + 2 = I am now totally in love with this story.
Ya know, when most people get a pet it's something normal like a dog or cat... Is Silver gonna get a pet alien spaceship?
6509797 What? Noooo. Of course not!.... NIGHT is going to get a pet ship, being the Captain and everyone else is under her rank.
There is no telling how old this ship is at this time. I am surprise That Princess Celestia or Luna is not in Ponyville Trying to do something at this time. Let see if Princess Twilight or Prince Silver can git a handle on this. Be for some pony make a mistake that well set off the computer to attacking Ponyville again.
Dragonfox
The use of "one" twice like that is a bit cumbersome. I'd change "dear one" to "dearest."
"Heart attack" is two words.
There are two spaces between "it" and "back."
A straightforward exploration of the alien ship this chapter. I was less surprised than I expected to be by the revelation that the entire ship is unmanned (or "unponied," as the case may be). That said, it seemed like a natural extension of Twilight's hint (several chapters back) that Silver's regalia should be involved with this things somehow. The bigger question is exactly how that is. I'm also starting to wonder if the silver planet that Twilight spotted was actually this thing coming closer to their world (though that would make it incredibly huge).
Beyond that, I feel like there's little left here for me to review, simply because there's little room for interpretation or analysis where action and exploration are concerned. Silver's familiarity with science fiction was a boon to the group here, as he was familiar enough with the underlying principles of what was going on that he had no problems making educated guesses about how to manipulate it. That said, it was very apropos that Night Watch was able to catch on so fast that she was able to manipulate the (malfunctioning) computer into raising her access level.
So now they head to the heart of the ship, and hopefully we get some answers.
6512730 Fixed!
More like y2k words...
Ouch, yeah. A good question, when a computer finds an overflow, would be "How big is the int you stored time in and what even was time zero?"
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I think the computer went Y2K! (sorry couldn't help myself)
Why does night get to be captain
Did you know that every time you go over 2k you have a risk to encounter 2k error?
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Gasp, not the y2k error! Anything but that!