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There are two spaces between "The" and "very."
I suspect that this should be a trembling "breath," since she said more than one word.
6519750 Fixed! Two chapters in a day? A typo in itself.
The board is set. Dire warnings are whispered from the dark. I like the way your muse is thiking. I have no doubt the typos will be unspeakable.
Was that the Text talking to Night? Is it trying to end Silver Stars influence and that is why it dos not wont this to happen? Silver Star has rebelled against the Text in the past in the direction on how minny Princesses for mates. It not like it was out rite hostile to him but it seems that it set a path that wood destroy him to git him out of the game?
Dragonfox
6520237 Was it intentional to call the Text the Typo? Not sure he'd like that.
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Sorry. I meant the Text.
Dragonfox
6520260 He/she/it is a creature of unknown true desires.
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Silver lost. He even had a "Last Chance" warning. Isn't it cheating to un-die? Twice?!
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Who is to decide if it's cheating or not? It's not Silver that is putting this plan in motion but his friends and family. Princess Celestia, Princess Luna and Princess Twilight Sparkles are sum of the Rulers of Equestria and have decided to take this action. Princess Cadence wood more then likely agree to this action. Do they not have the rite to do this?
Dragonfox
Silly Text! Stop leading us to tragedy, it's getting boring!
Silver's Aetheric net is getting another overhaul, isn't it?
Keep going! ;)
Eeeesh, Text must be a real fan of Greeks and their writing eh?
Comedy! Draaaama! Deeeeath.
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Death is something not simply undone.
To violate its claims is to violate the natural laws of the Universe.
To be reborn again would be costly as his first 'death' was more of an elevation of power rather than this death that had outright destroyed him.
Weather or not he returns is within the domain of the Text to dictate what happens next.
If he is revived I wouldn't be surprised, besides, who else would entertain the Text in such ways again?
Unless, of course, there is a new piece on the playing field that vows for their attention.
6519797 It seems that the pieces are rapidly coming together, and the attempted resurrection will take place soon.
What was interesting here was the heretofore unknown rule that you can't come back the same as you died; that in essence, you have to be reincarnated rather than resurrected per se. That's an interesting rule, and one that fits with this story's take on the source material; Twilight's unicorn body "died" when she undid the spell that undid the swapped cutie marks of her friends, and so she had to come back as something else, that being an alicorn. Silver went through the same thing. But since he died as an alicorn, he now has to come back as something else...apparently something he was before.
This makes it very fortunate that Silver's physicality has changed so many times over this story. As it is, it was interesting to see the various ponies debate what he should come back as. I was rather surprised to see Night Watch push so hard for him to return as a mare; was that because she could presumably come back as an alicorn mare, and then they could just turn him into a stallion again? Or does Night Watch just like Silver more as a girl? As it is, we know that Twilight prefers Silver as a stallion, not to mention Tumble. There's also the fact that a herd needs a stallion, as Fast Change (rather bitterly) pointed out.
Of course, this might all be speculative anyway - having some of Discord's blood in there seems to seal the deal that nothing will be guaranteed (including this working at all)! This pretty much guarantees that Silver's adventures won't end, since he'll always live in "interesting times."
Most noteworthy, however, was the Text's message to Night Watch. My gut reaction was to say that it was being cruel, but there's a tone in its words that suggests something other than spite or malice. Rather, it seems almost tired, in a sort of "I want to quit this, already" kind of way. It's like it sees the rest of the cast as pieces on a board who don't realize that the game is already over, and it's time to go back in the box.
So I guess we'll see if the pieces can outmaneuver the game master.
6522614 It makes sense, but you've made Silver into a real Mary Sue.
I decline any SUE response as acceptable. More and more versions of Sue were created to basically denounce characters and stories without having to put any effort into the specifics of why. Without giving a why people guard their opinion from any counter argument and thus lose in credibility for consideration.
Silver does seem to have it going for him and many might try to claim this makes them a Sue/Stu, but the fact of the matter is even in the real world some folks that started with nothing ended up having everything through neither their actions or inaction I can't claim them to be Sue/Stu only that they've left a mark and a feeling that I want them to have their happy ending.
Needs a spinoff where he's brought back as a Phoenix
6812599 What would that add specifically?
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This is stupid why can't he be a princess even if he can't be a prince the princess was a entirely different form
When authors do this I find no joy in reading the story anymore it just changes to much. It's not like there was a problem of him being op he was honestly weak as all get out
Remove that.