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I've been putting off reading this story for a while, and decided to binge read the last ten or so chapters...
I knew there was a reason I was putting it off. Now I feel empty.
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Appropriate chapter title is appropriate.
6512701 That first image is broken. I do hope you enjoyed the ride to this end.
6512706 I did enjoy it.
6512715 I'm glad to hear at least two! The last chapter was added today.
Poor Silver Stars. He's in the horsey afterlife now. Probably being annoyed by Iam Noone.
"So howed you get here?
"I was incinerated by an insane computer."
"Wow, that's harsh. I got high and drowned in a swamp. Got any good drugs?"
6512720 I enjoyed the ride, the ending was rather sudden, and vaguely reminded me of this. Though you did it much better and over a longer period of time.
Night "Watch" sat, still and stoic.
If any friendship problem "arose."
The problem would be "fixed."
Two "carefully-cupped" hooves.
Twilight's name is misspelled here.
6512856 that is possibly the most infuriating part of this entire thing. I had a flash of how it should work, I made it work. It had nothing to do with quote throwing it away quote. If I wanted a happy, but stupid, ending and I could have had him fly away in the spaceship never to be seen again off on wild adventures with Twilight and everybody else. That sounds pretty lame really. No, that is not how many Muse want to do it. My muse works in its own ways. It said, he is going to die. I asked how, this is what it told me. Very few like the way my muse decided to end this particular chapter of things, but too bad.
This epilogue did a lot to alleviate my dissatisfaction with how the last chapter ended. Personally, I think that tragedies should end with a glimmer of some sort of hope for the future, not in a vague "things will get better somehow" kind of way, but with the hint that there may yet be some specific way to undo whatever awful thing happened. In that regard, this final piece of the story delivered masterfully, letting us hope that maybe things might get better somehow.
I also think that this chapter was right to not expand its focus, an opinion which caught me by surprise when I thought of it. Normally, I prefer a resolution to be widely-encompassing, but that wouldn't have worked here. The reason for that is that this last chapter wasn't meant to be the fallout and reaction to Silver's demise - indeed, had that been shown, it should have been its own chapter, since it would have been substantive enough for it - but was instead meant to keep the focus entirely on that last little flicker of hope.
To that end, it did very well. Even if the story doesn't continue, this last chapter gave it a much better send-off, and I appreciate it.
Will there be more oven Silver story.
6513104 I am honestly uncertain at this time. I felt confident last night. Today I feel meh. Silver was doomed to die, practically from the start. His death would be brutal and beyond his power to control, but it would be something he could have avoided. No amount of power he did, or did not, amass would stop it.
It feels sad to think others say his entire life was not worth living, or reading, because it ended in a way they didn't like.
6513115 So he is gone forever.
love is power and true love is pure power.
Harts Fire
6513115 so, that happened. I fear you may have lost a reader in me. What motivated you to kill off silver?
6795190 There are more chapters. Keep reading! It gets better, promise.
Um...Night Watch?
arose
plucked
Twilight