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Watch out there might be Typos in chains somewhere too or will they put you in chains for the typos?
Some good stuff here. Though...
Sounds a little wonky, I think The second blow struck true would sound better, but at the very least replace truth with true so its the second strike hit true.
6251406 Fixed, along with a few other things.
Good to see Silver revealing his backbone again. We'll see if he manages to be any good at keeping the pegasus at hooves-length, when it's all said and done.
a really good chapter with lots of action.
now how Will Silver handle the next chaligon standing before him?
and will Nefer be able to handle a full sized stallion?
Harts Fire
Oh there you go, now you've done made him mad. Do you really want to know what a prince of the night can do to you? Very well...
Didn't expect plan B.7F to come into play. Unnamed Mare can quickly become a liability...
Keep going! ;)
6252084 Silver has reached the limit of what he will accept, he is learning bit by bit.
One of the "scrawnier-looking" females.
There are two spaces between "She's" and "practically."
6253156 Typos tied to a stake and left for bored jackals to play with.
6253417 Okay, so Silver is finally playing on their terms. This is good, since it's their game (e.g. their society) and that's really the only way he can be a part of it, short of trying to conquer them completely and make them live the way he wants. However, I wonder if Silver realizes that although he might manage to win their respect, he's doing so in the way that they dictate, which means that he's not going to be in much of a position to say "and here's why you have to change."
Of course, that's not really his purpose here. As I've noted before, he's on a fact-finding mission, so it's not like he's going to reform their society on this trip. Rather, I suspect that the best he'll be able to realistically walk away with is enough material to tell the Anugyptians and Saddle Arabians how they can approach the Anubians in a way that will let them be listened to. Major change takes time (unless it's some sort of violent revolution, and those are much better at tearing things down than building things up).
In the meantime, Silver now also has a secondary mission, that being rescuing that poor pegasus. She's quite the sad figure, having been abused to the point of docility, so it's good that Silver was able to coax a spark of hope out of her. She hasn't completely given in yet, probably because she remembers what having a better life is like, unlike Bottom. It was also nice that the story lampshaded Silver's resolving not to get involved with this mare. Of course, given that she's likely been a sex toy for a lot longer than Silver has, I doubt she'll be wagging her tail at him anytime soon, but at the same time it's important that he not let her sudden hope at being rescued transfer into misguided feelings for her rescuer. He doesn't need to be cruel, of course (she's had enough of that), but he needs to make sure to encourage her to have hope without making it personal.
Of course, Nefertari is wagging her tail at Silver, and keeps flowing back and forth across the line between seductive and goading that it's like she doesn't even know it's there. She's clearly playing up the "warriors take what they want" angle, and is teasing Silver to see if he can do that, but I remain unclear as to her end goal in doing so. Normally I'd say that she's just playing up cultural norms - that this is how she treats any male that she's interested in, or who shows interest in her - but she's made it very clear that she knows a lot about Silver, and seems to have some sort of plan in mind...but what it is, I have no idea. (It's also notable that no other males, or females, seem intent on approaching "the priestess." Are they afraid of her? Or has she defeated anyone who'd try to bed her, since it seems like there has to be some sort of challenge involved with courting.)
Either way, it looks like Silver is about to find out...
6255236 All caught up! Silver doesn't want another marefriend. He has plenty of those and has made an oath to himself that he does not need a single one more. Three servants and three lovely wives and the circle of princesses? Check please! But he can't just abandon this pony in desperate need. But first... Nefertari...
Interesting. You give Silver all these super powered artifacts, and then pit him against an enemy able to challenge them. But you said there were 5 and he only has 3. I'm guessing one will be a horn ring and the other... well, let's just say he's getting a bit op.
6510362 He looks forward to that theoretical day when he can OP all over a problem and it'll go away.
This nafari women reminds me of the tribal women from far cry 3