1692260 that's true it was sweet knowing he died and it wasn't surprising to me that he was betraying them but it was really good and how u made twilight evil was I'd but interesting Ur story it's the first one I've read with her becoming evil

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That... that was a hard chapter to write. However I think Rainbow's victory over Tartarus was all the sweeter for it.

And it built up one my best works, TiM: Price of Victory chapter 2, Second First Date.

1691851 thanks I'm loving your TiM series just finished best of intentions worst of results I thought you actually killed twilight and was about to flip out

Thanks for the watch.

Nice pic btw.