For many years Equestria has lived through time unaware of what lies beyond the stars. Except for the flying military power known as the Wonder-Bolts. They've managed to keep one of the greatest secrets ever in Equestrian history, the Stargate. Although the Wonder-Bolts have left the Stargate locked up in an abandoned base to soon fall victim to the erosion of time, they've decided to start up the project to start once again. The Stargate base is now fully restored and ready for use but one issue remains. Protocol addresses that teams of different specialties must be organized before any gate travel is established. And the one team left to form is the infamous squad of reconnaissance and exploration, SE-1.
Note: not all rules of gate travel from the tv show (SG-1) will be used.
Luna as general of the Wonderbolts?
Seems an odd choice. Then again, I guess Spitfire is officially "captain" of the Wonderbolts. But she'd have plenty of time for promotion in 15+ years.
I am... intrigued enough to follow.
Maybe Lightning Dust will meet Col. Mitchell's standards. Ain't nopony gonna match up to Jack, though.
When I read this I keep picturing Luna but hearing her dialog in General Hammond's voice.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Lightning Dust seems a bit too accepting of this whole thing, and Luna seems a bit too eager to divulge top-secret information to a pony who by all rights ought to be kicked out of the Wonderbolts.
Also, it sounds like Luna's trying to explain wormhole physics to a foal. Then again, this is Lightning Dust, so that might be appropriate.
Lighting dust makes a great jack. Wonder who will play as dr., crap forgot his name.
I liked this chapter best of the ones so far, by the way.
I can't wait for pony variant of Teal'c.
Will there be a teal'c.
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I'm trying to have this fic loosely based on the first episode of Stargate (children of the gods). So the pony version of Teal'c won't make an appearance till later.... I'm keeping most if not, all the characteristics that Teal'c had on SG-1 but this pony will have a different background, but he or she (haven't decided yet) will still be involved with SE-1.
I'm rather glad it won't become clop. And I am interested in how you've set up the Changelings' homeworld.
The trouble here is, for an introductory, it doesn't hook the reader. It just sort of meanders about, which won't draw in a first reader.
One of the better chapters in the story, IMHO.
I think the gate dialing in the background was nicely done here, along with Lightning Dust not wanting to hear the scientific explanation (an O'Neillish moment
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One relatively minor thing -- "Sargent" should be "Sergeant" (despite how the word sounds). It looks like it was right in the last chapter, by the way.
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rember evry think after seson six is a collective fever dream
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