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The beginnings of DJ Dust

DJ Dust (an up and coming DJ) comes into ponyville where he meets the friends that mean more than anything to him and the love of his life. Unfortunately you'll have to read it to learn more.

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Fan art is appreciated because I currently don't have a picture for this fiction yet.

This is my first fiction so it might not be as you expect.

Update: Fixed spelling errors!

To Do List: Moar Details!!!

Chapters (2)

Prolouge · 8th Feb 2012 · 204 words
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Chapter 1: Entering Ponyville · 9th Feb 2012 · 1,719 words
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DeadlyRose

DeadlyRose #1 · Feb 7th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1: Entering Ponyville ·

Gotta improve, did AWESOME.
I love it!

DJ_Dust

DJ_Dust #2 · Feb 7th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1: Entering Ponyville ·

196915

Will do. It was made mostly on a smartphone so it's not that great. We all know how they are

2K Chrome

2K Chrome #3 · Feb 7th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1: Entering Ponyville ·

I'm sorry, but I just have to critique. I'm so sorry!

First off, title: Beginning
Prolouge: Prologue
Other spelling errors
Need to capitalize the start of some sentences.
Break up your paragraphs like when a new pony is speaking.
Lastly, liven it up. It's just so flat.You did this, said that, thought this. Details.

First fic though, please don't be angry...