Attraction

Rarity is tired. Very, very tired. A big order has left her devoid of any energy and she just wants to sleep. Unfortunately, her magic decides to act up. What will happen to the poor mare? And why, of all times, does this happen just now?

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Production Run

Production Run #1 · Apr 16th, 2013 · · ·

This was hilarious.

BeastialMoon

BeastialMoon #2 · Apr 16th, 2013 · · ·

This.
Fantastic.

Zeyon The Green

Zeyon The Green #3 · Apr 16th, 2013 · · ·

I would never expect Rarity to use such crude terms. Lucky for Rarity it was Twilight who did the damage she will probably be able to skip out on repair bills. Poor Sweetie Bell probably had to be hospitalized...

Visuality

Visuality #4 · Apr 16th, 2013 · · ·

Sweet Celestia, Rarity, fuck her like a true champion!

Periphery

Periphery #5 · Apr 16th, 2013 · 2 · ·

Well that was pretty amusing, right up until the very end, where I don't find Rarity's last paragraph believable at all. Plus isn't Spike probably still sleeping up in Twilight's bedroom? Something more like this would have made a little more sense:

"No, Twilight. Now you're going to take me to the hospital--where my sister will most likely be joining us shortly--so that I can get this impending brain hemorrhage treated and the shards of your window removed from my body. Then in three days when I wake up, I might decide if I love you." Then she falls into an unconscious heap on the floor.

DerpedRainbow