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Reminds me of that one Shrek movie....
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I didn't think of that but it does give a vague resemblence. Thanks for reading!
This has the same cover art as fifty other stories......
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Sorry! I changed the cover art, which I take no credit for, but I have little skill in drawing. Thank you for letting me know! Hope the story will make up for it.
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It wasn't your fault.
It's just that so many other stories seem to use that cover art for some reason.
Very nice job with imagery and amazing descriptions --- I can't wait to read more!!!!
Great story with plenty of potential. Keep 'em coming.
Thanks a lot to Killgor911 and KorraEclispse for the compliments! I will do my best to work on keeping these chapters done well! And work on finding a spellchecker.
Great job with the story. It's so awesome!
Yay! Update!
So... Dashie has Princess Luna living in her head? Interesting...
I look forward to the presumably spectacular escape in which badassery will be witnessed and plot devices thrown at us for us to mull over.
My only complaint is the fast pacing, and the fact that parts of the story seem almost like a monologue. And I'm pretty sure only arch-villains do that, unless Dashie is still possessed by that evil spirit and IS the arch villain!
Thank you for the comments Monocromatic Rainbow. I hope I can improve as the story moves on
I'm confused big time. It seems like there is a chunk of the story missing after she asks for the suit. Was she in a dream?
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The idea was that she was flitting back and forth between her dream state and reality very quickly durning the collapse of the prison, but I may not have made that clear enough. I apologize for the confusion, I'm still new at this and figuring out what works and what doesn't. Thanks for reading!
Em, chapter twelve appears to be a bit misspelled? Unless it was intentional it should be "Wear and Tear".
If you meant to spell it "Ware and Tear" then I apologize, and I'll go hide in my corner again.
3838459 Nopony saw anything...
Thanks for the correction, another reason to find someone to spell-check, I suppose.
Pretty good chapter.