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HereticBRONY


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"No land is my own. No name is mine. No titles shall I take. I exist only to keep the candle of life burning brightly, and nothing else matters.

"My vigil shall be long, tiring, and dangerous. My sword stands ready. My shield stands guard.

"Night is gathering, but I am prepared."

With these words, the Keepers of Light do stand against the necromancer, the zombie, the lich. They watch, they wait, they guard, and they keep the innocent safe.

Many stand atop the Wall. Minotaurs and griffons. Ponies and diamond dogs.

The Wall is where the chaff of society goes when it becomes inconvenient to keep them otherwise. Many have either committed or have been accused of committing crimes. There are bastard sons of nobles, there are rapists, thieves, frauds, dissidents, and prisoners alike here.

Yet they must stand guard against a foe that many deem to be a bedtime story because no one else will. No one else can.

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After her coronation, Twilight and her friends must journey north to the Wall at Celestia's request because something sinister is gathering. Something dark. Something evil.

All that she knows is a warning: Night Gathers.

Drawing inspiration from places like Game of Thrones, GARO, Dragon Age, Warhammer Fantasy and others, this will be bloody, profane, and not for children.

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Comments ( 5 )

This doesn't sound like "Game of Thrones" at all.

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No, I completely did not just hear a bastarised version of the oath of the Night's Watch.

Well, it reeks of the smell of A Song Of Ice And Fire.

And that's what's dragging your story down. If you made it a bit less like the Watch from the books and added a bit more of your own unique zest to it then it'd be good.

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Agreed. This is coming off like a bastardisation of George R Martin's work.

Please, for the love of Celestia, change it.

Will all of you please be quiet and give the story a chance. It's only the prologue and the future chapters may just change your mind if you keep your opinions to yourself for the moment. HereticBroney also said that this story is a combinations of other tv showes, books, and what not so it would not PRIMARILY be Game of Thrones. Personally I want to wait and see what happens in the next few chapters before giving my full backing to the story... Especially since it will have elements of a Tokusatsu series I like a lot; GARO!!!

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