Written for a writing challenge between myself and UnlicensedBrony
Prompt: Applejack - Queen Chrysalis - sleepover (Best damn prompt? I think so)
Light romance and slice of life
cover done by teiptr
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I am wondering why I feel nothing at the moment.
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Is this a good thing? or a confused thing? I don't know!
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we may never know, I could get bored one day.
Not really romance is it?
Still, well done.
2393019 me either
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This just adds more to the confusion.
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well played sir.
Huh, now that's an interesting concept!
I loved the ending - a very generous and kind play by Applejack. Nice work! And an opener for future romance too... if you ever do get bored and continue it someday, I think it could be a cool and unique ship.
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Light romance, it could be come something.
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Thanks!
You set the scene pretty well, but after AJ drank that stuff, it kinda spiraled into something sweetly lackluster. I like the ship though. However, Caramel......really? Braeburn would've been worse, granted. Unfortunately, I don't have a better alternative myself.
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Thanks for the review, yeah caramel was the first pony to pop in my head. And it was 3 am three days after it was due >.>
2399584 no prob 20%
That was nice. I'm kinda hoping Chryssie won't have to drink that potion in the end. I mean, she could just go around the country and for example snatch the firm of someone who just died or is terminally ill in a town half the world away.
Good stuff.
Cya
Raziel-chan