Many have heard the tales of the creature known as the Bogey Pony. But none alive know of where it came from. Take a glimpse into the past, and see the origins of the one known as Glam, the Bogey Pony.
((The story's main character is based on the character from this blog http://glam-the-shadow-pony.tumblr.com/ ))
So far the story has good plot and is well written. You are an extremely talented writer and i hope you continue to write more stories
Thanks. :3
Hope you continue writing this; this story has much potential.
Please excuse my impatient behavior, but:
MOAR!!!! Or the bogey pony will take you!