The_Creation_Mare
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when i read the last sentence all i said was . Heh nice one
I think you mean "creativity". Creationism refers to the religious belief that life and Earth are created by a supernatural being.
2384176 Well, I understand creationism is mostly referred to religious belief, but in this case, Creationism as in the art of creating or something. That's what I've been calling it all this time... But I guess I'll have to change it if it's not clear that it's in the creativity sense, not religious.
I am not saying this out of rudeness but, do you need a little help with your story?
I believe if we combine forces, we can unveil this stories true colors!
This story possess such possibility that is yet to be shown!
I offer my services, and await your reply....
2386682 Oh, don't you worry, I've written many stories before, so I have quite a bit of experience. This story is supposed to start off slow and stuff, and gradually get faster-paced and filled with more excitement.
I plan on submitting at least two chapters a day, by the way.... Each day gaining more and more consistency throughout. I plan on finishing around 20-25 chapters and calling it quits. Then I'll probably start on a new story 
Ouch, what a torture that hes going through. I'm not so sure if this is dream or reality.
2393564 Wanna know a secret?
The dreams that Chance has there are actually her somehow being there, wherever that dream was. It's a little difficult to explain now, and I don't want to give out too many spoilers, but it gets pretty interesting.
To all those budding writers out there:
Inspiration can come from anything, especially as something as silly as this:
i.imgur.com/HhryMxi.png
Squidward fucking up things up eh?
daym
I would suggest you separate that wall of text into paragraphs to make it readable, but yes dayum good chapter!
For dialogues, separate it into single sentence. Like this:
"Hey!" The voice called out, the blue stallion turned his head to try find the source. "Hheyyyyy" Ace looked up, noticing a pegasus hiding in the cloud.
"..not her again", muttering to himself in annoyed tone...blah blah.
Cheers!
-Morfonious
2584145 Thanks! I'll edit it right now; I'm usually too in to the stuff that I'm writing to remember to add breaks
I was wondering what happened to this story, glad to see another chapter
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
3340708 Thank you, that means a lot c: I sort of gave up, I didn't think the story was actually liked. I just wrote it out of boredom, but I'm glad you like it