no offense but he is no match for the regal sisters, who kicked his butt. not to mention the finale shows that at the combined might of the surpasses even that of discord by far. though of course they would not be about to run about blasting anything that comes their way cause the whole destruction thingy.
In the Crystal Empire, Cadence looked up, worried. “...It's can't be. He was beaten...” And in the darkest, coldest regions beyond the Empire, something dark started to stir...
4397491 hmmm, true. but he would still need to keep the regal sisters away from him. they messed his shit up bad before, and by all likelyhood thye are even stronger now.
think that is what he was trying to do with the crystal empire. conquering with directly confronting the regal ones.
Major meetings are happening in the Palace of Friendship, yet she holds Dawn Court in Everfree Castle (Ch5, supposedly a mere day prior)? I'll grant that that had been written prior to S4 Finale, but there's no need to rush the timeline.
It's clearly the Smooze. The Smooze is going to swoop in and have super kinky slime sex with everyone, and then he'll join Twilight's harem after learning some bullshit friendship lesson.
4397365 do you just hunt down percieved problems in stories and then complain about them before the actual plot is revealed or have I just happened to stumble on you doing it a lot lately?
4397740 .............. neither? seriously i just made a comment. and it is the first one resembling criticism for this whole story. just said that sombra is not a direct threat. writer said he is not planing to be direct. simply replied that he owuld need to make sure the regal sisters could not get to him.
Is the camp just at Ponyville then? I figured it was implied they were out of town.
If they are out of town, this passage is what confused us. I think.
No, if I want some delightful chaos, I'll go hang around the Cutie Mark Crusaders. Did you see their exploits early this morning?” Rarity groaned softly. Fluttershy frowned. “What happened? Are the poor dears okay?” she asked. “They're fine,” Discord said, taking his full size. “Although, Rarity, you should probably tell your sister to avoid the Flower Trio's shop stands for a while. I think they're out for blood.”
4398138 Fair enough, I didn't think that it was a continuity problem, but that Discord is just being a bit of a creep, but knowing that tidbit from the comics makes this seem much less so.
I was literally just checking this yesterday, and it updates today. Do I...*looks at hands*...do I have power here? ... *rechecks every chapter twice* Your move.
Oh dear. Why do I get the feeling Fluttershy just became an alicorn? I mean, what else would get the attention of every other alicorn or being with the power to rival one? Looking forward to more. Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
sombra?............ so?!!!
no offense but he is no match for the regal sisters, who kicked his butt. not to mention the finale shows that at the combined might of the surpasses even that of discord by far. though of course they would not be about to run about blasting anything that comes their way cause the whole destruction thingy.
I think you can drop the word dark in this sentence.
Discord and Crazy Eyes should meet:
i.imgur.com/qGAs6VC.jpg
Does this mean that Discord has a food fetish?
It's as if a million voices cried out in ter...oh, no wait, it's just sombra.
This chapter was hilarious, sexy and awesome. And that cliffhanger bro
4397365 There are more ways to conquer than direct confrontation...
Eight Months?!
Yet another great chapter
It's Sombra!!!! (laughing) sombra.
4397491 hmmm, true. but he would still need to keep the regal sisters away from him. they messed his shit up bad before, and by all likelyhood thye are even stronger now.
think that is what he was trying to do with the crystal empire. conquering with directly confronting the regal ones.
Major meetings are happening in the Palace of Friendship, yet she holds Dawn Court in Everfree Castle (Ch5, supposedly a mere day prior)?
I'll grant that that had been written prior to S4 Finale, but there's no need to rush the timeline.
Yay! Bulk Biceps and Fluttershy forever!
4397542 ...Good point. I'll edit it so that the Dawn Court took place in the Palace.
4397542 Edited in Palace of Friendship references where needed. I think I got everything...
4397549 Chapters 3 and 5 at least then. Might be more, I only followed the timeline through those two.
Haha!! I figured Fluttershy would be first. Too bad Sombra's coming back now.
Soooo, what would be better - sex-slave Sombra, or him rounding up his own harem and challenging Twilight to some kinda Sexlympics?
I can just imagine the next chapter going like this
Twilight: Sombra be my waifu
Sombra:NEVERRRRRRR!!!!
Twilight: Then you must die HADOUKEN !!!!!derpicdn.net/img/view/2014/5/10/622807__safe_twilight+sparkle_animated_screencap_princess+twilight_hub+logo_hubble_hub_spoiler-colon-s04e25_lord+tirek.gif
Also I'm curious what would happen if twilight magaculated while she had all of the alicorn magic
It's clearly the Smooze. The Smooze is going to swoop in and have super kinky slime sex with everyone, and then he'll join Twilight's harem after learning some bullshit friendship lesson.
It's in my headcanon.
4397365 do you just hunt down percieved problems in stories and then complain about them before the actual plot is revealed or have I just happened to stumble on you doing it a lot lately?
4397740 .............. neither? seriously i just made a comment. and it is the first one resembling criticism for this whole story. just said that sombra is not a direct threat. writer said he is not planing to be direct. simply replied that he owuld need to make sure the regal sisters could not get to him.
4397628
Here, use this, it looks and works better.
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Please direct yourself to my avatar.
Shouldn't the Crusaders still be at camp? Or am I missing something.
I thought this was dead, I had taken it off my watch list.
Don't take 8 months for the next one pls.
4397856 They are. I don't understand why you brought them up.
4397595
they both sound pretty funny, but I think sexlympics would be hotter too.
4397990
Is the camp just at Ponyville then? I figured it was implied they were out of town.
If they are out of town, this passage is what confused us. I think.
4398035 *facepalms* I'll edit it.
4398052
Haha, everyone misses something every once in a while.
Nice to see you back!
4398035
Changed it. They're out of town.
Fluttershy gets her end off and suddenly reality breaks? Sounds legit.
4398065 How is Discord aware of what the cutiemark crusaders were doing this morning? Is he stalking them? Discord no that's creepy.
4398132 This is Discord. Mostly Reformed Spirit of Chaos and Disharmony. He KNOWS when chaos is going on and would mostly likely go to see.
Also, he's friends with them in the comics.
4398138 Fair enough, I didn't think that it was a continuity problem, but that Discord is just being a bit of a creep, but knowing that tidbit from the comics makes this seem much less so.
4398157
Here you go.
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4398168 Well... that's the first time anything has actually made me want to read the comics. Guess I will need to look into that.
I was literally just checking this yesterday, and it updates today. Do I...*looks at hands*...do I have power here?
...
*rechecks every chapter twice*
Your move.
Sombra is the next stallion?! WAit a minute... Aren't we getting past the halfway mark?
Oh snap! It updated! Oh hay Twily... Can i join up!
4397445
More like whined out for crystals. Amirite?
4398168
That first panel, you've killed me. My heart, come back heart. Don't die on me.
Sombra arouse at the same time Fluttershy came.
They just fucked an ancient evil into existence. That is a thing they just did. That is so metal. :D
4397435
most likely
I have no words for this chapter... Okay, maybe one word:
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Thanks for the update. This is becoming one of my favorite fics.
Great going Twilight, you broke the universe.
Oh dear. Why do I get the feeling Fluttershy just became an alicorn? I mean, what else would get the attention of every other alicorn or being with the power to rival one? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
4399171 Not sure why you think that. I myself think I see the (potentially) next male of Twilight's harem.