This chapter was ridiculous... -ly funny. So many lulz. Trixie showing up having learned from ancient masters of combat magic (Who I see as magic versions of eccentric old martial arts masters) was amazing. Good one.
Excellent!! And I loved Pinkie as the Question. But I was expecting more interaction between her and Discord(no sex), but a conspiracy theory is good too.
I lol'd at Pinkie being "The Question", Trixie's "duel" was really hot, and the best of it, they've broke Cheerilee!, now I am hoping that Twilight Get Berry Punch willingly and SOBER on her birthday party!, at this point Ponyville will be her harem by the end of the month
I suppose that there are worse things to do than letting a multi-time hero, princess of Equestria, and confirmed nice girl use my body for her pleasure.”
3096698 Hell if I know, I barely know who that character is. I know vaguely what she looks like from some Deviantart account that does a silly Q&A Twixie thing, but that's about it. I just generally figure if you have an OC you don't want people using 'em without permission.
3096705 I will not use another's OC without their permission. I might make a reference here and there (I mention 'Luna's handmaiden and her husband in another story I wrote) if I really like the character but I'll avoid using the full name or have them make a full appearance unless I have explicit permission to do so.
I would expect the same as it pertains to my own OCs, Barricade, Harbinger, Jam Session, Beatbox, and Big Time.
Heilige Mutter Gottes My cheeks are redder then cherry tomatoes after reading all of that . i ave ta admit yer know vhat yer doin. I hope fer more soon.
You have mixed up their there and they're. Common mistake really When to Use How to Test: There Naming a place, a thing, or the existence of something Replace “there” with “here”: Their Showing possession Replace “their” with “our”: They’re Combining the words “they” and “are” Replace “they’re” with “they are”Examples:There:1. “I’ve never been there before.”Test: “I’ve never been here before.”(Correct!)2. “This is there ball of green string.” Test: “This is here ball of green string.” (Incorrect.) Their:1. “I went to their cottage last summer.”Test: “I went to our cottage last summer.” (Correct!) 2. “Their is the pizza place I was telling you about!” Test: “Our is the pizza place I was telling you about!”(Incorrect.)They’re: 1. “They’re the two best players in the league.”Test: They are the two best players in the league.” (Correct!) 2. “My cousin is one of they’re closest friends.” Test: “My cousin is one of they are closest friends.” (Incorrect.)
Nice update. Getting Cheerilee in early was a smart move. She brings a nice bit of wholesomeness to the mix. Noticed quite a few grammatical and punctuation mistakes, though. Not enough to spoil the story, but still, very noticeable. Also, the cloppy bit seemed a little... light. Probably could have drawn that out a bit longer. Also, also, will you be bringing in Octavia? She's like, my number two favorite background pony. 3094216 I shall call her... Kittylee!
LOL, nothing more
aww crap, twilight broke the school teacher.
This chapter was ridiculous... -ly funny. So many lulz. Trixie showing up having learned from ancient masters of combat magic (Who I see as magic versions of eccentric old martial arts masters) was amazing. Good one.
Kitty Cheerilee? Things just keep getting weirder.
It's baaaaaaaaaaaaack! Love this story glad to have you back in the hot seat.
Is there an ETA on Walking Nightmares? if you don't mind me asking?
HAWT!!!
Excellent!! And I loved Pinkie as the Question. But I was expecting more interaction between her and Discord(no sex), but a conspiracy theory is good too.
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Constant laughing from all these shenanagins, truly makes me smile again :D
It's 'threw'
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Excellent.
What kind of an assistant?
Trixie's response to finding out Twilight became an alicorn was hilarious. She certainly got what she asked for.
Wow such a hot chapter can't wait for the next one.
Possibly the best chapter so far, and that's saying quite a bit.
...
3094570 She's basically taken over for Spike while he's at camp.
...MORE!
3094931 Wonder how's he doing at camp.
I hope Twilight and Trixie take the time to record these old combat magics for posterity, in between all the rutting and such.
3094216 And I'm okay with it.
just a quick question, could non-canon ponies appear in this, or is it too much to ask if Milky Way would appear in this?
Note: i'm not the person behind Milky Way, just asking if it is possible for her to appear in this.
That was hilarious, Need more!
THAT was awesome. Truly awesome.
Oh, by the way:
Might want to check that. It's confusing as hell to read.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Why do I imagine a Pony Master Roshi when Trixie mentioned some of the "Old Combat Masters only teaching her to ogle her flanks?"
3095564 Even if Mysterio'd be into it, do you think Milky Way's creator would agree to let his/her OC appear in someone else's smut? :D
Oh god it updated.
Oh god the kinks. The lulz. The absurdity.
This is almost too much to handle. Almost.
3095704 BECAUSE YOU CAN!
I lol'd at Pinkie being "The Question", Trixie's "duel" was really hot, and the best of it, they've broke Cheerilee!, now I am hoping that Twilight Get Berry Punch willingly and SOBER on her birthday party!, at this point Ponyville will be her harem by the end of the month
So, she/they screwed the pussy into Cheerilee?
well how about to let a gryphon or a changeling join next? the harem can always need a wider selection
The next thing we know, Berry is joining in.
ha. Catcheerilee is best Cheerilee
Tentacles are like landmines. By the time you've realized they're there, its too late.
And yet there's a DWM movement.
3096499 Let's not bring that nonsense into this, 'kay? This is just going to be a silly, sexy story where Twilight gets laid a lot.
3096524 lol, no prob.
3095725 Isn't that what she spends half her existence so far in?
3096698 Hell if I know, I barely know who that character is. I know vaguely what she looks like from some Deviantart account that does a silly Q&A Twixie thing, but that's about it. I just generally figure if you have an OC you don't want people using 'em without permission.
3096705 She has a fan club on fimfiction, so I guess he's okay if you ask nicely.
3096705 I will not use another's OC without their permission. I might make a reference here and there (I mention 'Luna's handmaiden and her husband in another story I wrote) if I really like the character but I'll avoid using the full name or have them make a full appearance unless I have explicit permission to do so.
I would expect the same as it pertains to my own OCs, Barricade, Harbinger, Jam Session, Beatbox, and Big Time.
Heilige Mutter Gottes My cheeks are redder then cherry tomatoes after reading all of that . i ave ta admit yer know vhat yer doin. I hope fer more soon.
You have mixed up their there and they're. Common mistake really When to Use How to Test: There Naming a place, a thing, or the existence of something Replace “there” with “here”: Their Showing possession Replace “their” with “our”: They’re Combining the words “they” and “are” Replace “they’re” with “they are”Examples:There:1. “I’ve never been there before.”Test: “I’ve never been here before.”(Correct!)2. “This is there ball of green string.” Test: “This is here ball of green string.” (Incorrect.) Their:1. “I went to their cottage last summer.”Test: “I went to our cottage last summer.” (Correct!) 2. “Their is the pizza place I was telling you about!” Test: “Our is the pizza place I was telling you about!”(Incorrect.)They’re: 1. “They’re the two best players in the league.”Test: They are the two best players in the league.” (Correct!) 2. “My cousin is one of they’re closest friends.” Test: “My cousin is one of they are closest friends.” (Incorrect.)
Those poor Diamond dogs
3098335 I really wanna know this myself and shit got real between trix and Derpy... DU DUH DUUUUUUUHn
The only thing Pinkie needs to complete the costume is orange socks
Nice update. Getting Cheerilee in early was a smart move. She brings a nice bit of wholesomeness to the mix. Noticed quite a few grammatical and punctuation mistakes, though. Not enough to spoil the story, but still, very noticeable. Also, the cloppy bit seemed a little... light. Probably could have drawn that out a bit longer. Also, also, will you be bringing in Octavia? She's like, my number two favorite background pony.
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I shall call her... Kittylee!
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And changelings can be mares or stallions!
we need a big orgy scene...
great story
... Is this going to be like Earthbound, in that at no point it does not stop getting stranger?