• Member Since 25th Mar, 2013
  • offline last seen Sep 29th, 2013

Right To Derp


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After a mysterious stranger crash lands-Literally-In the small town of Ponyville, Rainbow Dash feels threatened, yet intrigued, by this stranger. Although he is constantly challanging Dash and her pride, she can't help feel this boy is something special.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 11 )

Very well done

>>Sycrande
Well thank you!

Oh, and if you guys like//dislike it, I'd appreciate it if you commented, too. I'd like to know what I did right//wrong. c:

//Mobile

Great work. Really enjoy the concept and the presentation, and it's just the first chapter!
I think you will go far my friend!

I need more

Comment posted by Right To Derp deleted Apr 2nd, 2013

You shall get more once I finish second chapter. And let me tell you;; There shall be Derpy. :moustache:

this was very good and i liked how you made rainbow dash act like she would in the show and im very exited for chapter 2
p.s. i forgot to mention I LOVE DITZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

need moar now! how long does it take you to publish a chapter

Weeeeeeeell, I am a bit busy by the fault of school, but this weekend I may be able to finish Chapter two..:twilightsheepish: Heheh, maybe.

Lights out for the fool who flirts with Rainbow... :rainbowlaugh:

I'm really confused. Are they human, or ponies, or both? Please, make up your mind! :raritydespair:

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