Lightning Ace and his friends are about to celebrate the Summersun Celebration but the return of Nightmare moon has come. Though the question, is if she is the real threat, or if there is someone even more powerful waiting in the shadows?
Sequel to The Legend of Lightning Ace: Childhood
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Not bad at all.
He knew his freinds would follow if they saw him, so he kept a low profile.
It should be friends.
the old, dusty runed platform
I think you meant ruined.
causing him to screem in agony
Should be scream.
bladed stone columbs
You probably meant columns right?
Is'nt your fillyfriend
The correct contraction would be Isn't.
Sorry about this. I'm such a grammar nazi. The story looks good though!
2725458 Fixed the derps! As for the runed part i meant as in the platform had runes on it. But thanks for spotting my spelling all the same.
2725514 I see, thanks for catching my derp!
Yes! The adventure continues!
It's time for my annoying nitpicks.
and flash is helping the weather teams
The first letter of the name should be capitalized.
They had spotted some funnle clouds
Funnel.
next five minutes rescueing other ponies
Should be rescuing.
That's all I noticed right now.
2745691 Found the derps and thanks again! At this rate you might as well be my editor lol
2747821 I too, can't wait to see your rendition of Flash using his powers! Hope your laptop gets well soon. And as for powers, it will only get better. Stay tuned for more!
2749075 He isnt dead...hes been having a run of bad luck with various things. He made a blog about it if you need details.
2749138 Your welcome
Awesome chapter! The title reminds me of Team Fortress 2 somehow.
You know what time it is.
"Hotsause?"
Hotsauce.
"Yeah...I Still don't know
The 's' should be lowercased.
his studder
Stutter.
one thousanth
Thousandth.
on it's hooves. as it's mane
It's. This is a common mistake when writing, so just remember that 'it's' is a contraction. (That probably didn't help)
heard the tails?"
Tales.
and ultimatly his ability
Ultimately.
I'm done. I sincerely apologize if this really bugs you.
2753987 Thanks once again! And you're not annoying.
Infact you are being quite a help. Where's the TF2 in this chapter, anyway? I don't have it so I don't get it...
2755478 The title Shock and Awe reminds of the soldier's job which is to shock and awe every mercenary he meets. After that he kills them. Yeah, I'm guessing you don't understand. If you want to learn more about this game, just go to the Official TF2 wiki. The other is outdated and is probably being used for other things. I also don't have the game either. :P
This is Awesome!!!!
, I Can't Wait for More!!! 
Glad to see that this isn't dead. Onwards to the corrections and stuff.
You don't need thee apostrophe here.
I guess you're missing something here.
Causing.
Isn't.
Ridiculous.
Serpent.
Mustache.
Tantrum.
There needs to be a comma after Rarity.
Like this:
"Rarity, your tail!" Pinkie exclaimed.
That's all I spotted. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
Hoo boy, i feel a "The Legend of Lighting Ace 3" Coming!!!
Either Way, The Story is AWESOME!!! 
4065098 I do plan on a third! See my latest blog post for details. To be honest, I personally thought I might have rushed the ending of the 2nd story. It was for good reason though. For the season 1 part of the series, I want to go into it guns blazing...with hopefully less random haitus'.
4065243 Well I Think the 1st and 2nd stories were pretty good, seeing an Kid traveling with Childhood Friends along meeting new friends and foes. new adventures and new battles... (I Think I Just Turn Myself into Trailer Announcer) The Stories are Awesome!!!
So I'll Be Patient with your stories.