• Member Since 22nd Feb, 2013
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Half Baked Apple


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Greed, Sloth, Wrath, Gluttony, Pride, Lust and Envy, the sins that eat at everyone. The Princesses worry that Discord could be feeding the element's sins, causing them to overwhelm the pony. So in hope that doesn't happen, Celestia sends the friends to search in each other to find if Discord is playing his hand. First is Applejack, and she hopes that her sins don't misbehave.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

Well this is certainly a very interesting idea.

Let's see where it goes.

I'm mighty curious about the human tag... wonder what it'll be....
Any way the concept is sure nice.
Will keep track of this :ajsmug:

2311680
o man, i didnt realize i put that on their
i totally derped that
:derpytongue2: yep

Meh. If you worked on your grammar a bit, this might be bearable. I disliked, not to be mean or anything, but because it's the honest truth. That's what AJ would have wanted. :ajsmug:

2312775
yah my grammar could be better but i dont know anyone who's good at it so...

2312882
The writing guide that has been added to the site is very helpful. :scootangel:

http://www.fimfiction.net/writing-guide

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