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Hm, you have my curiosity. I shall be following to see where this story will go.
Don't know what to expect, but screw it, it seems mysterious and if I end up hating it I'll abandon it. So far, a like and a favourite!
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I'm glad you're giving it a chance. And yes, mysterious is what I was going for here.
sounds ok though i skimmed through it really fast
2838210 You had my curiosity, Now you have my attention.
Mysteriously malicious, but deliciously full of potential. A great introduction, on my end. I'd like to see where this goes.
No, I'm not going to use an image.
You had my curiosity, sir, but now you have my attention.
Well my dear sir you have done something I find rare in stories even like my own. You have very good gramer and spelling as far as I could see! The plot of this story seems to spread itself a lot in one chapter and it gives the reader something to think about too. If I had to give advice I'd probably have made a more introducttion like chapter. While you did masterfully introduce the tone we don't quite know too much of the plot or the character. This is just me being me but that's what I think...anyway I hope to see a little more next chapter and expect good things from you!
Well you managed to make something very enjoyable so far. A good prologue to what has the makings of an epic tale. Just make sure to continue it, and dont leave us hanging.
This seems interesting, I look forward to seeing where it is going!
You alive, brother?