When Sprik wakes up Rainbow Dash from a nap, she doesn't know anypony. But over the course of the day, Rainbow Dash shows Sprik around Ponyville and introduces her to Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie (the Pink), Applejack, Rarity and Twilight.
(Author's Note: This is my first fanfic, so go ahead and criticize.)
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How do you pronounce Sprik?
Sp-rick
I like the idea, but you need more than dialogue to pull it off. Add some descriptive text to help people visualize what is going on. Maybe let us in on what Sprik is feeling, or maybe the other ponies. What you have is good, but need more narrative.