(Re-vamping 2022) John was the family man, the hard working son filling his missing fathers shoes. A recent turn of events have set his fate and destiny in motion. Upon meeting a shapeshifting Queen our protector might find a new family along the way
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Aye lady, ah'm likin the story. Please continue ah'm intrigued
2294631 Seriously? If I got you interested, that means that I'm doing something right.... YES!
2294637 I do enjoy most stories, well clop is rather hard to spike my interest just due to the rather... ahem, yes anyway, I do enjoy the story with the utmost of interest
2294813 Nothing bad about a little clop, this was going to have a sex scene further down in the story, but than I remembered something. I don't know how to write clop. Some things have changed in the story but generally the same.
2294871 Trust me, some stories a little better off without sex. If you wanted you could always hint at it. You know like have it really persuade the reader to thinking they had sex even if you didn't explicitly write "Put his penis in her vagina" sorry just had to write that. I might do something like that in my next story
2294914 I'm going to actually do that, It would make it just a bit better. I currently working on the next chapter, about 700 or so words in, so it should be up soon.
Is it me, or is Nicky really easily swayed in his decision to not let John leave?
I like it. And why is Nicky acting like a 5 year old? If you could, would you PLEEEEEEEAAAASSSEEE make em' longer? Oh well, to late. Hope there's a sequel to dis.
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If you don't know how to write clop, then you ask a clop writer to help you.
3045057 Sorry for the extremely late reply, but it's been here for a bit.
The Guild: Fallen Kingdom.
Keep it cool, Condemned.
I so derp with the plot questions sometimes...
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Which is totally fine, not everything needs to be revealed, even in due time...
It's quite curious how everyone is so apparently readily accepting this situation as normal and inevitable.
Also, John senior is such a prankster and annoyingly dickish for being so vague. Says this important but we feel he's treating it like a big joke...