(Re-vamping 2022) John was the family man, the hard working son filling his missing fathers shoes. A recent turn of events have set his fate and destiny in motion. Upon meeting a shapeshifting Queen our protector might find a new family along the way
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seems like everyone needs some training, if only they all could come to our world were they can get some real training.
And I didn't even think to use Magic?
2703162 Yeah man, how'd you forget that?
2703199 I dunno, maybe it was the giant F-off dragon
2703218 could have been, we'll never know.
I blame obama
I agree, we all need training. Also, weird glow. are you going to do the 'overpowered new elements' shtick?
2704150 Nope, they can't even be the 'New elements', for the Mane 6 are still around and kicking, it's just that they aren't really all that important within the story. As for the glow, it mainly happened due to bring tossed around, causing Dark to become delirious and hazy.
In terms of training, I know exactly how that's going to play out. You just have to wait and see as the story unfolds.
Keep it cool, Condemned.
(p.s The next chapter will take awhile before it's actually done, for I want it to be around a 15-20 thousand word count for the initial chapter to finish, so prepare yourself for a wait.)
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Sorry, I meant new elements as in not the elements of harmony, but a new branch of elements. Such as the 'elements of order' from the 'dawn shield trilogy.'
2705301 Personally, If I were to make it in some sort of fashion such as that, I'd have them to be called the 'Elemental Elements' and probably have them with distinct elements that they profess in. Dark would anything related to black magic or something like that, Terra would be Earth and stone, Pyro would be, as you guessed, Fire, Axton would be Air, Strife would be water. Though the Elementals wouldn't pass the count of five. The reason being as if one were to fall, all of them would slowly.. pass on with the loss of a member. Story purposes only. But thankfully for both me and the story, such things are only thoughts and ideas.
2707601 Thanks!
2708290 Just keep reading, plus I've been awaiting your reaction to this.