(Re-vamping 2022) John was the family man, the hard working son filling his missing fathers shoes. A recent turn of events have set his fate and destiny in motion. Upon meeting a shapeshifting Queen our protector might find a new family along the way
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Nothing like setting a named guy getting in bees with your queen to make your day (or night in this situation)
hahahaah better late then never I suppose.
so legit, i feel love
Love is in the hive
Love the chap.
You really need an editor though :S
You made me laugh with what the guards did, so here is this:
i.imgur.com/yRV7lt5.jpg
2408762 Well I have two proof readers, but I write the chapters on the site. Not google Docs. Their usually busy so I wont bother them. In all honesty, I do know that I need an editor. But how would I get him to see the chapter if it's not posted? I'm not sure.
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Skype or something? You can always copy/paste it onto pastebin and give the editor the link?
2408798 To let your mates see the chapter, you can PM them the document via Facebook
2409608 I figured I'd do it on Google Docs from now on, greater variety in stuff I can work with.. Now with tabs!
Goddess... I need a drink.
Just read all 31 chapters in 1 go, so...
I'm a little confused with the beginning... and with them having weapons in first chapters and not having them later.
Also if I guess correctly he and Chrysalis will have children whom he's protecting in first chapters.
And Moon Shadow from first chapters is the same from the last ones? Asking because she doesn't seems to be changeling in later chapters, but she's saying something like: "I think that a new Ruler for the Hive is in order." in first ones and is working with changelings.
It all is just somewhat confusing, but the story is really good so far.
ps. A little clop won't hurt
2409979 Well, Once I finally get everything down into the story and have finished it, it should all be clear as day... or at least I hope so.
In terms of clop, I honestly can't write it. I've tried my hand at it once and... well, it didn't turn out so good. Let's just leave it at that.
All 31 chapters, shit man.. nice.
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In terms of clop:
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2411171 Well, that's a start.
I mean that I'm just simply terrible at it, so I leave the clop scenes to my betters.
Sorry to say, but I'm going to be leaving the clop scenes out of this story. I'll hint to sex scenes and leave the rest to your imagination.
I'm sorry.
Keep it cool, Condemned.
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no need to be sorry
I have Fluttershy to fill the clop part
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You dohave a point
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Oy mate if you don't make a sequel I will find you and kill youyou
http://i.qkme.me/3qpw0u.jpg
2413712 Well, this is going to be a lifetime story. Going through the life of Darkmoon and his ordeals in Equestria. This will take quite a bit of time and multiple sequels to finish entirely.
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One, I sawwho the notificTion wasfromand just laughed
Two,yoj live another day, simple!!
And yojr doingreat on the story to
2413740 a new chapter should be out soon, I'm having my editors looking over the chapter as we speak. It should be around 3-4 thousand words.
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Buck man, if I still could right stuff, I would barely make 1000 a chapter, legit
2413754 All you really need it a basic grasp on grammar(my title) and the patience to write out a chapter or two. I bet if you sat down bored for a while, you'd try you hand at it sooner or later.
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Problem, myonly way onto the interweb is a smartphone, but abud ofmine isgoing to usethis account, so I guess itwill work? Buck I confused myself