(Re-vamping 2022) John was the family man, the hard working son filling his missing fathers shoes. A recent turn of events have set his fate and destiny in motion. Upon meeting a shapeshifting Queen our protector might find a new family along the way
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Seemed nice to me
2387804 Yes!
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2387842 The next few chapters are gonna be pretty chill.
2387854
Well good for chill chapters.
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On yeah I read your other story, seemed pretty nice, and like to see it going. Just imagine if Pinkie had a conversation with him.
2387898 With John... I can see it now.
Pinkie: Hi! My names Pinkie pie and I'm here to make you smile!
John: umm... Hello pinkie. My name's..
Pinkie: John!
John: How did you..
Pinkie: Well, I broke the fourth wall!
John: Wait what? How..
Pinkie: I could explain it... But nope.
2387930 Continuation:
Pinkie: Your not the John I know
John: Well that's because.....
Pinkie: You're the author!
John: Yes..... Wait what?!
Pinkie: You're the author of the story
John: Wait how do you know that?
Pinkie: I broke the fourth wall silly!
2387956 Continuation:
John: How do you do this?
Pinkie: Well, funny story. I was walking down mane street..
Two hours later...
Pinkie: And that's how Equestria was made!
John: .... WHAT?!?
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And that's how Equestria was made!
2387995 Because that's how we roll... in the Shire.
2388001 Yup
Das, very good, very good indeed, can't wait for more
2391884 Jenns became pregnant with John while visiting Equestria, when she returned to earth the portal closed. you'll see this later on.
2392300 It Frustrates me so!
2392326 I shall make these changes, both Cloudsdale and throne.
2392421 so technically my explanation was correct?
2392599 Absence: The state of being away from a place or person
Departure: The act of leaving.
Truly, both of these work but absence is better to use because he was away, but he never left... if that makes sense.
2392621 it does because Shadow was there, who was technically John Jr
2392621 but I think you had used departure in the story so you just contradicted what you wrote.
2392682 I did at first at first in a much earlier chapter, but thanks to some helpful readers, much like yourself, I corrected past mistake and minor errors I had in the story. Some of these mistakes happen from time to time. But I love writing the story, and it's fun to do. And fun is really all that matters, if I can entertain others along the way... That's one hell of a bonus.
I slmost gave up on the story because it was taking a while for him to get to Equestria, but in the end it was totally worth it
Shadow:" dammit, he was supposed to make peace and grow stronger, now what are we going to do?" 😅