(Re-vamping 2022) John was the family man, the hard working son filling his missing fathers shoes. A recent turn of events have set his fate and destiny in motion. Upon meeting a shapeshifting Queen our protector might find a new family along the way
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Why you kill mah OC bro?
Glad to see him used though.
2739268 Well, I'm sorry for the OC death scene, but your's wasn't the only one killed. In the chapter Fallen, but Never Forgotten, Diamond Sprint was a person's OC as well, but with his death, I was able to show that Dark and the others weren't just some people raiding and pillaging caves and stuff for no apparent reason. With your OC's death, I was able to finally introduce our our Official Antagonist. The Glorious Leader. Not to mention, it painted a rather interesting scene for the chapter itself.
Once again, Sorry.
Keep it cool, Condemned.
2739308 It's fine.
Just use his dying gifts well
2739319 With great power, comes great responsibility....
good thing the princesses are going to keep it instead of Dark, seeing as how his companions are a little off. I can just imagine how that would go..
Dark: We finally got it back!
Pyro: I know! It's so shiny!
Everyone looks to each other and begin to worry with Pyro's sudden interest in the orb.
Terra: You... stay away from that thing.
Dark: Maybe i'll just take it back myself...
Pyro: SHINY!!
Pyro leaps at the orb and as soon as he lays his hands on it, knocking Dark over, making him touch the orb as well. With both their hands on the orb, a bright light flashes and Dark looks around the area and notices that they're not in the San Palomino Desert any more.
Dark: Pyro, what have you done!
Pyro: I don't know! Where are we?
They begin to hear the sound of galloping hoofsteps and look to the side and notice an elf dressed in a green tunic, riding a bronze coated horse. The elf appears to be carrying a blue shield with three golden triangles embedded into the metalwork.
Dark: WHERE THE HELL ARE WE?!?
2739367 I can absolutely see that happening.
Especially with a couple generations of increasingly more powerful unicorn magic stored in it.
Still sad that the legacy of the Clovers has come to an end.
Has it?
2739380 Maybe.. We still don't know what happened to Four Leaf.
2739402 Yes
It isn't my OC, but I am still happy the legacy shall continue.
2739410 I see Four Leaf as a character WE created. You gave me Lucky, I gave him a brother. Keeping a long explanation short, he's Our OC.
I sound like a parent now..
2739441 Bah, specifics.
So long as the Clover legacy is not lost to some weaklings.
2739367 Oh Link
After a few minutes, we readied ourselves to travel, but Terra had one final offering for the stallion. With a light breath of blue fire, the stone slowly turned into glass cover.
“A grave fit for a king.” Terra bowed to the fallen stallion and turned away.
Did you take a bit from ERAGON
I thin k i can guess the leader of the changlings... is it Diamond Sprint?
2739683 Actually yes, a little inspiration did come from that amazing piece of work! Hell yeah!
And the leader of the Changlings couldn't be Diamond Sprint.. We've already been over this.
2739705 SHhhh let me have my delusions
2739715 Oh alright.
2739720
Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Ahahahahahahahaa, demon
Ohey Soul. Sorta forgot to finish formulating my thoughts on this way back, sorry about that.
2781435 This is very true my friend, but tis' the world we live in.
Okay now you earned your follow and even more, you are solely my idol. this was soo awesome
2787481 I'm glad that you think that way, for I solely seek to entertain.
Should you like an alternate take on 'It's always worth the price', maybe you'll like my story "Writer's Block". Tis' a self insert, so be weary.
Um isn't that the story i met you at?
2788852 Actually... yes it was. I'm just a little boogled with things tonight, well have you checked Markiplier In Equestria?
Yah i took a look, But i wasn't really interested in it all that much, i like your other two more
2791898 Well, you'll be happy to know that I'm going to be back on top of that within the next couple days, and I have another project that I've been cooking up for some time and it's going to be posted as a whole within the next week. Plans man, plans.
Yep it's all in the planning
2826610 Just met you and I'm already liking you.
It's been a while since I been in this site…
*reads this chapter*
…huh I actually never thought of that night would get that way with zecora…
2739683 I KNEW THAT WAS FROM ERAGON!!! Technically brims grave was dimond though, and "grave fit for a king" was "funeral fit for a king" (and also for a different person, with a different grave)
Anyways I'm reading eldest now
4702847 also the cyanide pill thing. That's from Captain America