(Re-vamping 2022) John was the family man, the hard working son filling his missing fathers shoes. A recent turn of events have set his fate and destiny in motion. Upon meeting a shapeshifting Queen our protector might find a new family along the way
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2312964 thanks for the feed back! I shall make these changes post haste!
2312987 Thank god your here, I wouldn't have picked up on these if you weren't
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2313024 More? MORE? yeah, ok.
he is so totally crushing on her!
2313113 Hopefully you'll like where I take this!
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so far i enjoy the story. and its got changelings in it! i always feel so bad for them. i dont think they are as bad as they are made out to be. i feel like they are alienated cause of how they look so they resort to "evil" tactics to get what they want. they all want hugs!
2313210 With that in mind, in my story the changlings aren't 'evil', they react and respond to everyday people and ponies as any other person or pony would and they generally follow the views of their leaders. With my latest chapter, you can see that Chrysalis isn't really hostile but the attack on the camp shows that they really aren't follow her views on the land and its residents at the moment.
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seems to be a real problem with poor chrysalis. always someone in her hive wanting to ruin her dreams for peace
2313273 You'll either like an upcoming villain, or love to hate him as the story progresses.
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anyone that hurts chrysalis is no one to love
2313303 I like you, my friend. You are awesome!
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*brohoof* shes most possibly my most favorite pony to read about. i look forward to your work!
Anyone wonder why there isn't a Chrysalis emoticon when there are so many fans of her?
2392300 How do you know if she's just not disguised eh?
I personally find the 'Queen Chrysilis x Human' stories deeply enjoyable and need to find more, they're just so perfect!
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Great story bro
It is regrettable that much of this story is essentially a summary report. Too much detail is left to the reader. Is the feeding a lewd affair or simply a happier form of hand-holding? Is the weekly thing out of severe need, or convenience? A hefty obligation for a first (perpetual) mission...