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10/17/17 - I sincerely apologize for all delays. Both of my stories will have the highest priority during my spare time. Look forward writing more :)

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Looks good, interesting premise, but far too short to get into. Very nice :ajsmug:

Comment posted by Sausage Enlarger 5000 deleted Mar 5th, 2013

cliché creaking sound.

I know I'm not one to talk; but unless you are writing a comedy, you should avoid using the word "cliché" in stories, as it tends to break immersion.

7172016
I'm taking your word for it, replaced cliché with chilling. It does seem a bit more fitting, thanks for the feedback.

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