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Looks good, interesting premise, but far too short to get into. Very nice
I know I'm not one to talk; but unless you are writing a comedy, you should avoid using the word "cliché" in stories, as it tends to break immersion.
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I'm taking your word for it, replaced cliché with chilling. It does seem a bit more fitting, thanks for the feedback.