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Published 24th Feb 2013
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A Mage's Power - Anonymo

Emrys, a young mage mysteriously arrives to Equestria with no memory of how he arrived there, only that there has to be a reason.

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CommodoreGalland

CommodoreGalland #1 · Apr 29th, 2016 · · ·

cliché creaking sound.

I know I'm not one to talk; but unless you are writing a comedy, you should avoid using the word "cliché" in stories, as it tends to break immersion.

Anonymo

Anonymo #2 · Apr 30th, 2016 · · ·

7172016
I'm taking your word for it, replaced cliché with chilling. It does seem a bit more fitting, thanks for the feedback.

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