Hi, my name's Trivium, and I'm not good at intros. Let me just say a bit about myself, yeah? I am a male pegasus, 17 years of age, I am half a foot smaller then the average size for a pony my age, I have no friends, family, or house. I was basically waiting for the world to kill me before I decided to do it myself. This choice dragged me into a whole new life.
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- Because that totally hasn't been done before. Just saying.
2172989 Thanks for the feedback...? I can see where this story can be similar to others but I'm not trying to copy any stories.
i am liking this story
FAVORITED AND LIKED!!!!
2173075Thanks bro, good to see you're liking it!
Well the material good, it really is, but I think you rush things a little bit, I mean you could have done more before getting into that. Still agood story though.
This is a great story. please hurry up and make the next chapter so I can read it and be amazed. Thumbs up from me
2174728Irrelivant reply, but I just got a major Deja-vu attack.
This Is a really good Romance Fiction. Keep Up the Good Work.(PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST ANOTHER UPDATE).
2250219 Thanks man, sorry about the lack of updates, I've been extremely busy with life stuff. About to write the next chapter though!
DEPRESSING CHAPTER. ITS SAD.
Keep watch in the status of completion everyone!
I like it, sad chapter but good.
Keep it up.
this was just fucking sad to the point where i wanted to jump into the story give triv a friendly hug SLAP RAINBOW FOR BEING A BITCH and then fix everything in the poor guys life
Great story, I love all of it
...And I'm not going to read it. I mean, why should I, if your intro sucks?
WHY SHOULD I CARE?!
Another one.
A dollar for every time I see a story about a wangsty piece o'crap OC. Here's your downvote. Please, write about something else. 
2349136 Well if you don't like it you don't have to comment in such a dick-way. If it's not you're style of story then you shouldn't even spend the time to hate on it. Thanks for the feedback, though.
2350427 Thanks for the feedback, always great to hear good things from readers!
best chapter yet! PLEASE WRITE MOAR!!! oh, and by the way, ignore sabban, hes just being a dick, that intro made me read the story in the first place, and this is one of the best stories I have read.
Good so far!
However,
Don't skip. It leads to madness. Trust me, I've been there/done that.
Your story is one of the best I've ever READ!!!! you deserve at least 9000 more views no lie yo make more stories nows!!!
youtube - m16dernwarfare
if only i could get u more views and rating because u deserve it omgomgomg
2439908 Thanks for the support!
2440026 The weekend has arrived, staying up extra late tonight to try to finish the first chapter.
2446948 Thanks for the feedback!
2531291 Still a better love story then Twilight.
WINNNNNNNG BOOOOONER
i feel sorry for trivium, rainbow is probably only doing this because she pities him.
wow...just...wow...i want to slap rainbow dash and give her a piece of my mind. poor trivium
um... if she made a mistake, then she cant be perfect. being perfect is not making mistakes or having flaws at all, so if she made a mistake, she cannot be perfect. just wanted to point that out.
Dayum. Second chapter and our main character already made out with Rainbow Dash?
"That's like, an academy record!"