Everyone loves Octavia. All the stallions want her and all the mares want to BE her. But little is known about the celebrity's personal life and Octavia isn't exactly forward with it. One nosy reporter is determined to get to the bottom of this mystery, and perhaps pad his pockets in the process.
This is a short one-shot that hits close to home for me. I hope you enjoy.
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Very well written, also Philharmonica is a very clever last name to give her.
2152860 Well, Philharmonica is pretty much her 'fanon' name. I believe it started with the fanfiction Allegrezza, although Im not 100% on that. But I liked it a lot so I use it :)
This.
Its not bad.
I liked it.
I don't know why people can't see that Octavia is the best pony, I mean, she clearly is.
Interesting, though, how you made her have psycho. problems. Never thought of it that way.
Also:
Usually only three period marks are needed, really. Check through all of that for all the pauses.
But hey, can't wait to see if you'll publish more stories!
Cheers,
-TORP
I here by award you with a peom of my own creation. May it serve you well
(Nice story by the way)
till the bitter end, we stand together.
Side by side we suffer as one.
For we will never be subdued.
Always will our heads be held high for all to see.
For we are Lake-land.
and we will not be held down
forever we fight.
with pride on the line.
we will never quite.
we will never back down.
for we are lake-land.
and we are strong!
remember our names.
remember our faces.
for we will be back
and when we are.
we shall not lose.
I like this.
It keeps the mystery around Octavia and makes us wonder what those pills were at the end. And that last sentence!
2154066 Well, I like to think I kept it vague, but still gave enough hints to figure out what exactly her secret is. I may have made it too vague, though.
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That's ok, keep it vague. It makes it more like real life where not everything is obvious.
2154110 To be honest, when I first published it, I thought I made it -too- obvious, but I don't really think so, now. I don't think anyone has figured it out yet haha.
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Well...I have a few ideas, but I would like to keep them to myself. Plus, I don't want to know. I like having avenues open for my mind to wander through.
BTW fav!
Personally, a part of me would like for Octavia to turn out to be a Pie - not necessarily one of Pinkie's sisters but maybe a close cousin. That would explain why Pinkie was so outrageously familiar with her (it's hard to be formal with a filly with whom you spent your childhood in a shared playpen).
It was good. Vague, but good. I feel the vagueness was required since you were obviously using Limited. I liked it. Keep it up.
Also, how could you think you made it too obvious? WHAT did you think you made too obvious?
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Haha, well, I guess I thought it was obvious because I know what it is, so I already have the dots connected.