Fluttershy was just going Zecora's to give her some herbs.
But, as we all know, things never go as planned.
This story was inspired by the picture.
Also,GIVE FEEDBACK! THIS NEWBIE NEEDS SME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!
That is...um...if you don't mind but....um...you know...whatever you want to do is fine...
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Brain hurt. Grammer learn not.
I will anwser comments, even if negative.
Also, I can hear cupcakes being said outside my door....So nothing unusual
Also, FEEDBACK WILL BE THANKED!
If I don't anwser questions, it's either cause I don't have a internet or I have no sugar (Which is the day I rage
)
I will when you stop being such a story diva
Can you give a yay for the commenters? PLLLEEAASEE? :3
It's an interesting story
So kudos for that.
My one complaint is that sentences like "The owner appered not to her her, jsut seemed to stare straight ahead, right at Shy." that have quite a few errors in them can be distracting. Most of the time they were just typos like 'jsut' instead of 'just'. Not a big problem, what I usually do is come back the next day and read it through again. Trust me, it'll make your work shine!
I'm following your story so I hope to see more!
2129438 Oh thank you! I jsut type so fast that the word just becomes jsut. I don't know how that got by me I'm SUCH a grammer police! Then again, I don't remebber stuff well.
(You know, like behind the scenes of why everything played out like it did.)
NOW JOIN US IN A KILLING RAVE
And othertimes, I type the same word TWICE!
not mention it was like 11:45 when I finished.
Oh and thanks for following the story! There's gonna be some "Bonus scenes" after it's all done.
Now, i bid you ta-ta, as i must contiue the story before people get annoyed for waiting (I know what I would do if I were them)
Pinkie! Not yet! That's step 15!
While you guys are waiting for the next chapter, here's some pony fun to hold you over.
Whineing?
THIS.
IS.
SPAAARRTA!!!!!!!!
(And for anyone who's heard that before...)
(Can't I jsut spell one word right today! )
I know this one is gonna be whined about for being too short. But it is important for the "Behind the scenes" chapters I shall add later.
Also, I'm getting a pet soon. What do you guys think it should be?
I have 2 choices:
1. A boa contrictor.
Or
2. A Galapagos' Turtle.
*Wakes up from 2 day nap* (i've been awake for 2 weeks and 3 days. Needed at least 2 days
)
Okay, I need to stop writing fariy tales. And I need to start writing gore. That IS one of my specialties.
*Goes onto this site*
Wait...I created a account?
*Looks at my stories*
Woww....
Note to self: Stop trying to stay awake for 2 weeks every month.
Should I just delete this?
*Looks at rating*
*Looks at chracters*
So...sorry guys, gonna cancel this thing. I made it when I was DONS (Drunk on no sleep.)
And everyone knows that when you make stories when your Drunk On No Sleep, the stories become rubish.
I am keeping a account here though, just for fun bloody killing writing and what not.
Something tells me that this is going to be more like the German version of red riding hood.
ummm.. the beginning was cute and not boring, some spelling errors. i like the incorporation of the giraffe, but i feel that it would have been cool if she had something else unique about her and not just rhyming. it kinda implies that all african animals rhyme.
mmmmeeeeh.