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Brony in Ponyville

When I open up an email from Princess Celestia, I wake up the next day in Ponyville, as a stallion.

All inspiration comes from a very.... detailed, dream. :)

Chapters (3)

The Party · 7th May 2012 · 1,065 words
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Emailed by Royalty · 11th May 2012 · 1,133 words
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Realization · 12th May 2012 · 925 words
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angelicoreXX

angelicoreXX #1 · May 3rd, 2012 · · · The Party ·

split the paragraph properly when u do the intro to the human main 6

BryanPiekarski

BryanPiekarski #2 · May 3rd, 2012 · · · The Party ·

I cringed when you introduced the human mane 6, especially when you attempted to give them "human-like" names.

I'm sorry to be so brutally honest, but that was poor. Trust me, since we're all bronies here we're not going to have a hard time believing the names so there's no need to change them. On to the next chapter.

BryanPiekarski