Something that occurred to me about Spike and Twilight's upcoming status. This story references things that may happen in the season 3 finale, so spoilers ho!
The first chapter was written as a quicky when I realized something about Spike's and Twilight's dynamic. Initially, it was conceived as a comic which is why it's so short, but I lack anything resembling art skills so prose it is. If, however, there are artists that would like to use the idea and make an actual comic, please feel free. The second was written when I found the first story pretty funny and wondered if I could expand on the situation. The third was written when I decided that I was being kind of mean to Twilight.
Any constructive comments or critiques are welcome.
Chapters (3)
Why is there a pause here (three times?)
Hehehe, this was a rather funny if short story. Poor Spike and in some ways, Twilight. She really didn't mean to hurt him. Good thing he is a dragon or that would have been a lot worse.
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Because from fear.
Might work as one chapter, if you make the breaks big enough.
Otherwise pretty nice story. ^^
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I'm not sure if editing the story will cause a bump and since it's pretty minor I'll probably just leave it for now. Of course, now it's gonna bug me... 
Well, thanks for letting me know anyway!
I think that's a typo I missed. Oops.
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And yes, it's very good that Spike's a dragon.
Thanks! Initially I was going to mark the story as incomplete because I wondered if I could find any other humorous situations from this, but then I realized by the third time Twilight would have appeared really neglectful and I didn't want that. Also, the first paragraph gag would have gotten pretty tired at that point.
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Yeah! Let's go with that!
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Thanks! I think the chapter breaks are needed for the first paragraph gag, but otherwise, yes, it could have been one big chapter. Something to keep in mind for my next story!