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Love's Conclusion

The story of Octavia's last moments with the one pony she truly loved and cherished.

Rated teen to be safe.

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Syvvak

Syvvak #1 · Jan 29th, 2013 · 1 · ·

It was pretty good but you kept saying coltfriend. After the ten years, you would think it would become ex. And then with Vinyl being her marefriend...

Pretty good story, though. Good grammar and flow. Keep it up.

TheDocTorShy #2 · Jan 30th, 2013 · · ·

Nice little story to read, some good sad feelings from it.
Good starting story.

hiskid

hiskid #3 · Mar 29th, 2013 · · ·

I loved this! I made a reading, here it is!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sPRK0HOg7mA&list=PL5p3daDwRVGGkUY7_xis9-v9e6TbsVk0B&index=1

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